Joshua Fegley

Rookie - 5 Points (Just another dying day... / I'm fading away)

Comments about Joshua Fegley

  • poetry lover (1/12/2007 11:58:00 AM)

    I loved it very well written poem

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  • Buried Alive (12/22/2006 11:31:00 AM)

    this is great, nice rhyming and selection of words,
    'make your decision to start an incision'
    so concise yet vividly expressing your feelings

  • Misty Talbot (12/20/2006 5:53:00 PM)

    I have just read 'Again', very powerful

Torn Asunder

To say to her 'I love you' one day.
I think of what she might say.
To hold her so close, so near;
gently whispered in her ear.

To hold her with gentle hands,
giving into her demands.
I hope she will love me too.
To live a life together forever true.

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