Joshua Fegley

Rookie - 5 Points (Just another dying day... / I'm fading away)

Comments about Joshua Fegley

  • poetry lover (1/12/2007 11:58:00 AM)

    I loved it very well written poem

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  • Buried Alive (12/22/2006 11:31:00 AM)

    this is great, nice rhyming and selection of words,
    'make your decision to start an incision'
    so concise yet vividly expressing your feelings

  • Misty Talbot (12/20/2006 5:53:00 PM)

    I have just read 'Again', very powerful

When I Die...

When I die...
let my body burn.
Deposit my ashes,
inside my sepulchral urn.

Taken to the riparian of forlorn;
on the littorals so adorn.
As the wind will turn,
open my urn.

Let me be,
and set me free.
Let me fly,
when I die...

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