Kaitlin...Loved the poem regarding Anxiety...and the way your words gave it life...emotions have a funny way of controlling how are body reacts to the reaction, however we are the only one who can control the emotions...you write with a passion, go girl!
Anxiety is a dreadful. it does not allow correct judgement. having said that TS Elliott said anxiety is the precursor of poetry, or words to that effect. Descent poem. You appear to be a fellow sufferer
I just read Anxiety, and I found it to be an intense and honest poem. It evokes sympathy and empathy and does so does so, through imagery and word play. I would suggest avoiding words like like. Impressive, nevertheless.