karanvir sahota

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  • Margaret Haig Margaret Haig (7/12/2012 11:51:00 PM)

    I like your poems, try writing poems of how you think and feel to the Lord, and to let us know what God means to you. But you are a good poet you put color, and feeling in your words.

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I Would Not Be Happy

as i grow older exactly what is it that i am continuing to gain from life
even if half my dreams came true for a whole month
i would not be happy
that is the type of person i am
reality is a step farther then the transitory
rejecting all human dilutions of this creation
before you end up hating me
either forgive or forget me
because i'm a mystery if you name me you'll only limit your understanding

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