karen banks

Rookie (6/3/96 / chicago)

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  • Harry Bryant (5/10/2014 1:16:00 AM)

    Hi Karen, just finished your poem A MOTHERS LOVE, having written a poem for my own dear mother, I can see the love in your poem, even though you say she was not your mother, her love for you is as strong as a mothers love, that is a testimony for you my young friend, never doubt or deny the love you have for this woman. I also read your poem MIXED EMOTIONS, it is also a nice poem, though you sound a bit confused and not really sure if you want this kind of love, rest assured that love is love no matter where it comes from or who it comes from, and if anyone does not like who you love, let them be on their own way, they have no right to judge you under any circumstances. good luck in all you do and keep writing your friend in poetry Harry Bryant

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  • Allison Helman (1/26/2012 2:26:00 PM)

    Nice. Keep looking around and remembering. These will be the ingredients for your evolving poetry.

Real Love

it's real and true and great
never end or take a break
if its a dream then i dont wanna wake
if its real then its for me
if it dont last then it will just be
FAKE FAKE yep real fake
i hope its real for GOD's sake
because its too strong to go away
i dont want it to leave naw it can stay

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