Katherine Patrick

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  • Shaun York (12/29/2013 8:05:00 PM)

    I'm not sure exactly how I feel about the pom but the idea seems very strong. This is completely my opinion, but it might be better if the emotion behind the poem was exposed more by changing up the spacing and format of the poem as well as changing the pace using long and short words for the rhythm you want.

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Dark Days

Where the light in my world?
Am I blind to it?
I want to be happy like everyone else i see
But all i have is this fake smile
No one can tell im pretending
Faking my way through everything I do
My eyes are clouded over by this darkness
I hate feelinfg like this like im nothing
I cant see anything someone help me! ! ! !

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