Katherine Patrick

Rookie (02-11-96)

Comments about Katherine Patrick

  • Shaun York (12/29/2013 8:05:00 PM)

    I'm not sure exactly how I feel about the pom but the idea seems very strong. This is completely my opinion, but it might be better if the emotion behind the poem was exposed more by changing up the spacing and format of the poem as well as changing the pace using long and short words for the rhythm you want.

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Kill You

I feel my blood run cold
No longer feel the heat of you
Everything we been through now im done
You walk away not even turning back
Hate courses through my veins
You leaving me here to die
I want crack your bones to hear your screams
Hear the sickening snap of every one of them
Cut your flesh away slowly to drag out your pain

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