Katherine Patrick

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Comments about Katherine Patrick

  • Shaun York (12/29/2013 8:05:00 PM)

    I'm not sure exactly how I feel about the pom but the idea seems very strong. This is completely my opinion, but it might be better if the emotion behind the poem was exposed more by changing up the spacing and format of the poem as well as changing the pace using long and short words for the rhythm you want.

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I met you by the chance of fate
Now we are loving each other like never before
The warmth is nothing like ever felt before
It different then normal people
We are together as one soul
Noone can separate us, not by force
We are laying in bed, kissing so deeply
The moment was heated and pleasurable
More I want from you the more I crave

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