kibrom habtu

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  • Francis Kokutse (8/23/2011 3:56:00 AM)

    Well the reader an insight to your state of mind. Nice one.

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  • Leonard Dabydeen (12/6/2010 1:13:00 AM)

    inch by inch by inch and you measure life with textured imagery. Indeed a good write.Thanks for sharing.

  • Deogracias Bafuta Elomba Deogracias Bafuta Elomba (12/4/2010 2:08:00 PM)

    I have appreciated the way you've started to write the first line of your poem it sounds beautiful

Undo This Moment

my sweet, my soul, my heart
unstressed my mind, uncover my eyes
unloved my body, my silence cries
unfreeze my hands, unquestioned my heart
unfold my tongue, lets not depart.
unwise your self from selfishness
unlock the secret of beauty and be relentless
but the entire hope disappears
while your hand touches softness

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