Remember me (you probably don't want to) ? Reading your last few poems I have put you on my 'To Watch' list. You are writing some lovely stuff and I am looking for an eraser to go back and wipe some (of my) early comments. And those were so near your birthday.
I still think that you might want to use a smidgen more patience as I get the impression that you are purring along very nicely and then the revv's die down.
But great promise, in my amateur opinion.
I posted this under your poem Wonder, thought you might miss it.
To my great surprise, while deciding whether to comment here and spoil your day, I find another comment aalready here.
You are NO poet. You may have a little talent, now and then things look so so and a smidgen more promising but overall you are cluttering up the site with plain dumb junk. As the previous correspondent notes, there is no effort put into these creations (or little) and there is nothing that even smells of originality.
Yet you churn them out like an over-confident up herself wannabe poet.
Perhaps you should find a different hobby as I don't think the kind suggestions of poetryhound will save the day.
Read Witkovski (on this site and perhaps you'll get a laugh out of another one totally without talent.
Sorry Kimberly but I just don't think this stuff is very good. You have a lot of emotion, which is good, but your poems are not original and you don't seem to have put much effort into crafting them. I think you should read a lot of poetry by established poets, find some that you like, get to understand why they are recognized as being great, and let them influence you. My two cents.
at times I worry that time will stop before I can see you again everything second that sits between you and I is violet blackened with hate and curses that my mind invent for keeping me from you but each moment drags on