krissi b'williams

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  • Doc Penpen B Takipsilim (3/23/2010 9:30:00 PM)

    krissi,
    im very new at this site. as of now i have only one poem. i've read ur straightforward comments WHY you have made a score of 10/10 to 'Lady Grace' poem. after that i tried to study ur poem- the style, the format and the way you delivered your thoughts...
    it only reflects a real-true-free-spirit- from your CAPS to the use of numbers
    your own soul IS fully expressed
    the way you see it the way you feel it...
    that's why to me this particular poem ' INTERTWINED SOULS ' is...
    10/10
    (a complete you. beautiful!)

    -penpen

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Silent Treatment

THROUGH THIS RELATIONSHIP IVE CARRIED THE ENTIRE WEIGHT...
PRAYING 4 things to get better not worse
hoping we'd be great
not that i wind up getting hurt
i carried all the burden...alone all the time
trying to make this work...fooling myself into believing everything would be fine
i cooked every night...cuz you worked so hard everyday....
i cleaned our house....bcuz you brought him the pay
I WROTE YOU LOVE LETTERS, POEMS, LITTLE NOTES....

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