krissi b'williams

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  • Doc Penpen B Takipsilim (3/23/2010 9:30:00 PM)

    krissi,
    im very new at this site. as of now i have only one poem. i've read ur straightforward comments WHY you have made a score of 10/10 to 'Lady Grace' poem. after that i tried to study ur poem- the style, the format and the way you delivered your thoughts...
    it only reflects a real-true-free-spirit- from your CAPS to the use of numbers
    your own soul IS fully expressed
    the way you see it the way you feel it...
    that's why to me this particular poem ' INTERTWINED SOULS ' is...
    10/10
    (a complete you. beautiful!)

    -penpen

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Wake Me Up Call

(i need to explain this to the readers b4, i submit this poem....In 'wake me up call' there are 2 very different endings to this poem/story...they will be added on as a set of poems following this 1.Also we are not allowed to use profanity, and when i 1st wrote this poem, it included curse words...so bear with me as i change this 4m a rated r to a

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