krissi b'williams

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  • Doc Penpen B Takipsilim (3/23/2010 9:30:00 PM)

    krissi,
    im very new at this site. as of now i have only one poem. i've read ur straightforward comments WHY you have made a score of 10/10 to 'Lady Grace' poem. after that i tried to study ur poem- the style, the format and the way you delivered your thoughts...
    it only reflects a real-true-free-spirit- from your CAPS to the use of numbers
    your own soul IS fully expressed
    the way you see it the way you feel it...
    that's why to me this particular poem ' INTERTWINED SOULS ' is...
    10/10
    (a complete you. beautiful!)

    -penpen

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IM LIKE A CROSSWORD PUZZLE JUST AWAITING
ACTUALLY FOR
YOU...TO FILL IN THE BLANKS
THERE CAN BE NO HESITATING
AND YOU CANNOT USE A PENCIL, CUZ THERE IS NO MAKING ANY MISTAKES
AND 'NO' I WONT GIVE OUT ANY ANSWERS...
WHEN IVE ALREADY GIVE YOU...
SO MANY CLUES...

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