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krissi b'williams
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| 81. | Deepest Depression (Revised) | 7/5/2009 |
| 82. | Perfect | 6/16/2009 |
| 83. | (**'Through The Tough Times'**) | 6/29/2009 |
| 84. | *****(Be A Man) ***** | 7/5/2009 |
| 85. | ' Intertwined Souls ' | 8/3/2009 |
| 86. | A Childs Dark 'Help Me' Cries | 8/8/2009 |
| 87. | I'M Not Supposed Too | 6/16/2009 |
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I'M Not Supposed Too
im not supposed to love you
i am not supposed to care
im not supposed too live my life
wishing you were there
im not supposed to wonder where you are or what you do?
so im sorry, but icannot help myself for im still in love with you
Fill In The Blanks
LIKE A METHAPHOR
IM LIKE A CROSSWORD PUZZLE JUST AWAITING
ACTUALLY FOR
YOU...TO FILL IN THE BLANKS
THERE CAN BE NO HESITATING
AND YOU CANNOT USE A PENCIL, CUZ THERE IS NO MAKING ANY MISTAKES
AND 'NO' I WONT GIVE OUT ANY ANSWERS...
WHEN IVE ALREADY GIVE YOU...
SO MANY CLUES...
krissi,
im very new at this site. as of now i have only one poem. i've read ur straightforward comments WHY you have made a score of 10/10 to 'Lady Grace' poem. after that i tried to study ur poem- the style, the format and the way you delivered your thoughts...
it only reflects a real-true-free-spirit- from your CAPS to the use of numbers
your own soul IS fully expressed
the way you see it the way you feel it...
that's why to me this particular poem ' INTERTWINED SOULS ' is...
10/10
(a complete you. beautiful!)
-penpen