krissi b'williams

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  • Doc Penpen B Takipsilim (3/23/2010 9:30:00 PM)

    krissi,
    im very new at this site. as of now i have only one poem. i've read ur straightforward comments WHY you have made a score of 10/10 to 'Lady Grace' poem. after that i tried to study ur poem- the style, the format and the way you delivered your thoughts...
    it only reflects a real-true-free-spirit- from your CAPS to the use of numbers
    your own soul IS fully expressed
    the way you see it the way you feel it...
    that's why to me this particular poem ' INTERTWINED SOULS ' is...
    10/10
    (a complete you. beautiful!)

    -penpen

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Best Poem of krissi b'williams

I'M Not Supposed Too

im not supposed to love you
i am not supposed to care
im not supposed too live my life
wishing you were there
im not supposed to wonder where you are or what you do?
so im sorry, but icannot help myself for im still in love with you

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Date Myself

2nite at dinner, i was being rude...making fun of the food...
i was being sarcastic and nasty
iwas talking over people, mimicking them, being sassy
and once we got home, you got the courage to confront me...
'you simply asked me'
'when you look in the mirror, do you like what you see?
if the roles were reversed
and it was was me who always screamed n cursed
at everyone around me, ...at all my friends and family.'

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