krissi b'williams

Rookie (new jersey)

krissi b'williams Poems

81. Deepest Depression (Revised) 7/5/2009
82. Perfect 6/16/2009
83. (**'Through The Tough Times'**) 6/29/2009
84. *****(Be A Man) ***** 7/5/2009
85. ' Intertwined Souls ' 8/3/2009
86. A Childs Dark 'Help Me' Cries 8/8/2009
87. I'M Not Supposed Too 6/16/2009

Comments about krissi b'williams

  • Doc Penpen B Takipsilim (3/23/2010 9:30:00 PM)

    krissi,
    im very new at this site. as of now i have only one poem. i've read ur straightforward comments WHY you have made a score of 10/10 to 'Lady Grace' poem. after that i tried to study ur poem- the style, the format and the way you delivered your thoughts...
    it only reflects a real-true-free-spirit- from your CAPS to the use of numbers
    your own soul IS fully expressed
    the way you see it the way you feel it...
    that's why to me this particular poem ' INTERTWINED SOULS ' is...
    10/10
    (a complete you. beautiful!)

    -penpen

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Best Poem of krissi b'williams

I'M Not Supposed Too

im not supposed to love you
i am not supposed to care
im not supposed too live my life
wishing you were there
im not supposed to wonder where you are or what you do?
so im sorry, but icannot help myself for im still in love with you

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Wake Me Up Call

(i need to explain this to the readers b4, i submit this poem....In 'wake me up call' there are 2 very different endings to this poem/story...they will be added on as a set of poems following this 1.Also we are not allowed to use profanity, and when i 1st wrote this poem, it included curse words...so bear with me as i change this 4m a rated r to a

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