poet Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

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Comments about Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • Patricia Grantham Patricia Grantham (6/24/2013 10:37:00 PM)

    Lawrence is a very good Poet. He uses his words wisely
    and with distinction. I am very honored to be a part of
    of his poetry fellowship. In plain old fashioned words he
    does not Beat around the bush in his usage of the
    English language. Thanks to you honorable poet.

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  • Rachel Dowd Rachel Dowd (12/4/2012 4:58:00 PM)

    He reminds me of my beloved Grandpa His name was Lawrence too

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  • Justin Reamer Justin Reamer (5/17/2012 12:39:00 PM)

    Lawrence is a great poet. He knows how to make his poetry flow with good rhythm and rime, while at the same time he knows how to depict his message through his tone of voice. He is probably one of the great modern poets of all time.

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  • Wahab Abdul Wahab Abdul (5/6/2012 10:35:00 AM)

    He is one of the greatest poems among the moderns, he is one of my favorites, he is innovative and leader of our time in the field of poetry.

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  • Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (2/19/2012 5:29:00 AM)

    As Lawrence does not write like me, I like to read his poem. His poems do not have any attachment and it looks very strange to me. A Good poet.

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  • Ace Of Black Hearts Ace Of Black Hearts (1/25/2012 12:49:00 AM)

    An amazing poet with both remarkable and at times baffling skill and talent. I would have to say he is one of the best modern day poets out their.

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  • Hamish Morcom (1/5/2012 11:38:00 AM)

    You remind me of a young Allen Ginsberg

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  • Hamish Morcom (1/5/2012 11:38:00 AM)

    Are you really the 21st best poet ever to have lived?

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  • Smoky Hoss Smoky Hoss (12/15/2011 9:12:00 AM)

    Lawrence is an exceptional poet. I always enjoy reading his works, and would not hesitate in the least to recommend his poems to be read by anyone, and everyone. I absolutely love his poetry.

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  • Katie Ince (6/11/2009 7:53:00 PM)

    i appreciate you work, your rhythm of words i feel them
    thankyou

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Best Poem of Lawrence S. Pertillar

A Broken Heart Within

A broken heart within me knows,
What loneliness is...
When it is left to linger,
And slowly grows to wither in wishes!

A happiness living outside is dismissed.
For what it is.
Because it isn't felt,
From inside...
With a gladness that appears.

It's much too late to date a memory!
When fading ushers its leaving.
No one else can see it drift.
Yet an emptiness is hinged...
To a pain remaining that is grieving,
Within.

Time gone,
Like the wind blows,
Never returns again!
Not to visit in inquisitive sits...
With the one ...

Read the full of A Broken Heart Within

Zapped

When a mind is shut...
Don't try to pry it open.
It is better where it is decaying,
Left alone.
Leave it!
There is hope with others showing
Signs of response.
Those who are replusive...
Are already dead anyway!