Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 56,367 Points (February/'47 / Connecticut, USA)

Lawrence S. Pertillar Poems

1. Sooner Or Later -new- 7/17/2018
2. Embellished Skills 3/23/2015
3. Getting Done To Do -new- 7/15/2018
4. Until It Isn't -new- 7/15/2018
5. Materialized Tunnel Vision -new- 7/16/2018
6. More Invest In Protesting -new- 7/16/2018
7. Feeling Remorse -new- 7/16/2018
8. Flushed To The Gutter -new- 7/16/2018
9. A Passing Fad -new- 7/16/2018
10. Childish Foolishness -new- 7/12/2018
11. Negligence -new- 7/12/2018
12. Top Dollar -new- 7/12/2018
13. Having Sex -new- 7/12/2018
14. Low And Destructive -new- 7/12/2018
15. Noddles -new- 7/13/2018
16. Breathe -new- 7/14/2018
17. Ducking Quacks -new- 7/14/2018
18. Too Many Wicked -new- 7/14/2018
19. Odor That Stays -new- 7/14/2018
20. Variety Of Nonstop Nonsense -new- 7/14/2018
21. To Tease With Tricks And Trinkets -new- 7/15/2018
22. Farewell To Those Wishes Kept 3/22/2016
23. Once Abstracted 3/22/2016
24. Personal Battles 3/22/2016
25. Decoyed Ducks 3/22/2016
26. Roll With The Punches 3/24/2016
27. The Art Of Correctness 3/24/2016
28. The Eleventh Hour 3/24/2016
29. Far From An Exaggeration 3/25/2016
30. Dressed For The Occasion 3/25/2016
31. Waste Over Value 3/26/2016
32. Bitter Critters 3/26/2016
33. Favorites Of Whomever May Best Flatter 3/26/2016
34. Left Alone 3/26/2016
35. More Hyped To Delude 3/26/2016
36. That Lesson Has Been Learned 3/26/2016
37. In The Privacy Of My Aloneness 3/27/2016
38. That's Too Spooky 3/27/2016
39. Innocent Babe In The Woods 3/27/2016
40. Too Giving To My Neighbor 3/27/2016

Comments about Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • Tan Pratonix Tan Pratonix (10/25/2017 1:17:00 AM)

    I can say Lawrence is a good man. He encourages good poets. Hope he shoots down the bad ones. He writes very well. Great command of the English language (sadly murdered by the Ninjuns today on PH) . Lots of wit and wisdom in his poetry. I hope his poems have been published.17,874 poems is staggering! Lawrence, are you a poem-machine? ? ? ?

    I truly hope you've reached success on the Poetry Front. I couldn't find you on FB. But you must be somewhere. Keep up the good work!

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  • Marco Antonio Solano Marco Antonio Solano (6/5/2015 6:46:00 PM)

    I've read a few of your poems selected at random, and I find them to be powerful, yet very well thought out. But over all, what impresess me the most, is your consistency and dedication. It is a pleasure reading your works. Greetings

  • Elliott Rosenberg Elliott Rosenberg (5/15/2015 1:30:00 PM)

    Hi lawrence. Your words are moving. They take semantics to exponential contexture.. Your poem Baffled is just. Please feel free to shed light on my poem Baffled as well. Nowvwe are two pioneers baffling esoteric linguistics..
    With kindness elliott rosenberg

  • Ellias Anderson Jr. Ellias Anderson Jr. (11/22/2014 5:11:00 AM)

    Dear Lawrence
    your works are as fresh as a spring breeze...that will awake the humanity
    comme une lumière dans l'obscurité

  • Amir Mohammad Islami Chalandar (6/6/2014 7:12:00 AM)

    excellent poems. you are great in explaining your feels. i invite you to read my poem

  • Jack Growden Jack Growden (7/27/2013 4:45:00 AM)

    Excellent poetry Lawrence! Please take the time to read my collection, I am a young poet and keen to learn. Jack Growden

  • Patricia Grantham Patricia Grantham (6/24/2013 10:37:00 PM)

    Lawrence is a very good Poet. He uses his words wisely
    and with distinction. I am very honored to be a part of
    of his poetry fellowship. In plain old fashioned words he
    does not Beat around the bush in his usage of the
    English language. Thanks to you honorable poet.

  • Rachel Dowd Rachel Dowd (12/4/2012 4:58:00 PM)

    He reminds me of my beloved Grandpa His name was Lawrence too

  • Justin Reamer Justin Reamer (5/17/2012 12:39:00 PM)

    Lawrence is a great poet. He knows how to make his poetry flow with good rhythm and rime, while at the same time he knows how to depict his message through his tone of voice. He is probably one of the great modern poets of all time.

  • Wahab Abdul Wahab Abdul (5/6/2012 10:35:00 AM)

    He is one of the greatest poems among the moderns, he is one of my favorites, he is innovative and leader of our time in the field of poetry.

Best Poem of Lawrence S. Pertillar

$10 A Gallon?

$10 a gallon?
For what?

'Does that really matter now?
When it approached
One dollar per gallon...
You should have voiced your concern then!
Not when your pockets have gotten thin.
And deepened to hold more lint!
You want to make cents?
Put these sunglasses on.
Grab a twig from a bush...
And get to begging!
MAYBE...
You might gain some sympathy,
From someone who recognizes you are in disguise.
And they are in the mood,
To share with you their good attitude.
IF they have some of 'that' left! '

Read the full of $10 A Gallon?

Zapped

When a mind is shut...
Don't try to pry it open.
It is better where it is decaying,
Left alone.
Leave it!
There is hope with others showing
Signs of response.
Those who are replusive...
Are already dead anyway!

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