Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 109,583 Points (Connecticut)

Lawrence S. Pertillar Poems

6761. People Can'T See Their Misdeeds Diseasing 4/1/2013
6762. What Life Means When It's Seen To Love 4/1/2013
6763. Tapestry Of Travesties 4/1/2013
6764. You'Re Getting Up And Out Of Here 4/1/2013
6765. Unintentional Mistakes Made 4/2/2013
6766. Selfish Social Climbers 4/2/2013
6767. Few Can'T Take It Down A Notch 4/2/2013
6768. Many Have Been Told The Doing Stinks 4/2/2013
6769. What Do You Think It Might Be? 4/3/2013
6770. I...'Think' We Are Both In The Kitchen? 4/3/2013
6771. How To Do Things 'Their' Way 4/3/2013
6772. Where 'Is' Your Head At Right Now? 4/3/2013
6773. I Only Get To Pick One? 4/3/2013
6774. Unable To Overcome 4/3/2013
6775. No Spook Or Monkey 4/3/2013
6776. I'M Many Things 4/3/2013
6777. Obviously You Know Nothing About Greatness 4/3/2013
6778. Dumb Things Done 4/4/2013
6779. Exit List 4/4/2013
6780. Because That's What I'M Wanting 4/4/2013
6781. Do What You Preach 4/4/2013
6782. Just Keep Your Focus 4/5/2013
6783. I'M Not Into Dirty Dogfights 4/5/2013
6784. 'This' Valued Nonsense 4/5/2013
6785. The Bigger Picture 4/5/2013
6786. Is It Or Is It 'Not' About The Work? 4/5/2013
6787. Wherever A Nepotism Connection Sits 4/5/2013
6788. Not Admitted...Yet! 4/6/2013
6789. Made To Forget About Making Excuses 4/6/2013
6790. Some People Enjoy Their Burdens Kept 4/6/2013
6791. Protesting Against What They Had Accepted 4/6/2013
6792. Facts With Truth Told 4/6/2013
6793. Critique 'This' If It's Wished 4/6/2013
6794. At This Stage Of My Life 4/6/2013
6795. Often Done By Those Who Do Nothing 4/6/2013
6796. A Bunch Of Fresh Nuts 4/6/2013
6797. Buyer Remorse 4/7/2013
6798. Unconscious Of Their Evils 4/7/2013
6799. Too Much On My Mind To Waste 4/7/2013
6800. Rusted Fences 4/7/2013

Comments about Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • Elena Toledo Elena Toledo (3/12/2009 5:24:00 PM)

    Great and touching poem. This is very well penned and put together. I love it.

    thanks for sharing

    God bless you

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  • ~ Jon London ~ (6/27/2008 3:58:00 PM)

    Lawrence has the expression-ate magic of a genius, he has an outstanding quality, his ability to create such remarkable imagery in his fine writes, will hold the reader and leave them wanting more....If you like poetry of the highest standard...Lawrence is the man to read......sit back and enjoy the ride...............Lawrence Pertillar can effortlessly create the perfect journey into lushes loveliness for you to sit and enjoy fantastically written expression.

    All the very best

    Jon. London

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  • Chad Halle (1/2/2008 10:16:00 PM)

    Your poems make me move, I enjoy them very much so.

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  • Faith Elizabeth Brigham (4/30/2006 11:00:00 AM)

    Lawrence-You have so much talent and have always been one of favorite poets here. You have a wonderful style and are a true poet!

    All my best-Faith

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  • Prasetya Utama Prasetya Utama (3/17/2006 1:56:00 AM)

    Hello, How do you do? I had been visit and read your poem.
    Fine and exciting poem. Would you like to visit and read my poem.
    Kindly regard,
    Pras.

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Best Poem of Lawrence S. Pertillar

$5 A Barrel Of What?

Oil?
Now sold at what?
Five dollars a barrel?
This is an immediate sign,
That something is not going too well.
Has anyone communicated this,
To those who chose this direction?
And they seem to be okay with this decision?
There just will be more greed.
With those who once had it made in the shade...
To stand with others who demand to feed their needs.
And you all know how improbable that is going to be?
Who is going to touch us anyway?
All Mercedes will be curbed.
And Bentleys will be driven by those deserving.
Well...
Why the gloomy ...

Read the full of $5 A Barrel Of What?

Zapped

When a mind is shut...
Don't try to pry it open.
It is better where it is decaying,
Left alone.
Leave it!
There is hope with others showing
Signs of response.
Those who are replusive...
Are already dead anyway!