Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 109,583 Points (Connecticut)

Lawrence S. Pertillar Poems

6841. Before The Sunrise 4/12/2013
6842. With A Doing To Remain Anonymous 4/12/2013
6843. Someone Loved Much 4/12/2013
6844. Phenomenons Appearing Everywhere 4/13/2013
6845. Strict And Sticking To A Discipline 4/14/2013
6846. Not Here To Hoard The Feast 4/14/2013
6847. To Do This Effectively 4/14/2013
6848. That Wouldn'T Work 4/14/2013
6849. Too Clear 4/14/2013
6850. Not Up For Debate To Validate 4/14/2013
6851. With It Done 4/14/2013
6852. Peace Has Packed On A Fast Track And Gone 4/15/2013
6853. Skewed Ideals Accepted 4/15/2013
6854. Confused By The Process Of It 4/15/2013
6855. Too Incredible To Be Believed 4/16/2013
6856. Sanity Is Threatened To Succumb 4/16/2013
6857. What's That About 4/16/2013
6858. Kick It 4/16/2013
6859. Solidarity Shown And Shared In Grief 4/16/2013
6860. To What Extent? 4/17/2013
6861. Live Your Life 4/13/2013
6862. Forced Upon Me To Live 4/13/2013
6863. Someone Has To Leave Feeling Victorious 4/13/2013
6864. Frigid Lizzie 4/17/2013
6865. Who Came To Taint The Rainbows 4/18/2013
6866. Until Bliss Becomes The Thirst 4/18/2013
6867. With Your Eyes Fixed On Me 4/18/2013
6868. The Effectiveness Of Fear And Threats 4/19/2013
6869. We Don'T Know Who They Are 4/20/2013
6870. Sentences Connected 4/20/2013
6871. Paid Some Attention 4/20/2013
6872. Enclosed In A Bubble And Knows 4/20/2013
6873. You Keep Them Pounded Down 4/20/2013
6874. Are We To Get Close To Disclosing The Answers? 4/20/2013
6875. Not On This Day 4/21/2013
6876. Accepting To Acknowledge Violence 4/21/2013
6877. We Tried To Warn Them 4/21/2013
6878. Too Unique And Genuine 4/21/2013
6879. A Wake Up Call 4/22/2013
6880. Undetected Visibly 4/22/2013

Comments about Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • Elena Toledo Elena Toledo (3/12/2009 5:24:00 PM)

    Great and touching poem. This is very well penned and put together. I love it.

    thanks for sharing

    God bless you

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  • ~ Jon London ~ (6/27/2008 3:58:00 PM)

    Lawrence has the expression-ate magic of a genius, he has an outstanding quality, his ability to create such remarkable imagery in his fine writes, will hold the reader and leave them wanting more....If you like poetry of the highest standard...Lawrence is the man to read......sit back and enjoy the ride...............Lawrence Pertillar can effortlessly create the perfect journey into lushes loveliness for you to sit and enjoy fantastically written expression.

    All the very best

    Jon. London

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  • Chad Halle (1/2/2008 10:16:00 PM)

    Your poems make me move, I enjoy them very much so.

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  • Faith Elizabeth Brigham (4/30/2006 11:00:00 AM)

    Lawrence-You have so much talent and have always been one of favorite poets here. You have a wonderful style and are a true poet!

    All my best-Faith

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  • Prasetya Utama Prasetya Utama (3/17/2006 1:56:00 AM)

    Hello, How do you do? I had been visit and read your poem.
    Fine and exciting poem. Would you like to visit and read my poem.
    Kindly regard,

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Best Poem of Lawrence S. Pertillar

A Broken Heart Within

A broken heart within me knows,
What loneliness is...
When it is left to linger,
And slowly grows to wither in wishes!

A happiness living outside is dismissed.
For what it is.
Because it isn't felt,
From inside...
With a gladness that appears.

It's much too late to date a memory!
When fading ushers its leaving.
No one else can see it drift.
Yet an emptiness is hinged...
To a pain remaining that is grieving,

Time gone,
Like the wind blows,
Never returns again!
Not to visit in inquisitive sits...
With the one ...

Read the full of A Broken Heart Within


No one can survive these days,
Staying full of anger.
Heating up into a crazed madness.
Without prayers to say.
And deep faith remaining,
To be consciously aware of it.
This madness can not be,
The new normal to accept.