Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 109,654 Points (Connecticut)

Lawrence S. Pertillar Poems

7881. Speaking Terms 5/17/2011
7882. By Any Other Name 5/17/2011
7883. If It Was About A Lot Of Money 5/17/2011
7884. Transitions Descending 5/17/2011
7885. As It Goes For The Willow 5/17/2011
7886. Deep Within The Bowels Of Foreign Wombs We Search 5/17/2011
7887. Staying Within The Box 5/17/2011
7888. For Them It's Automatic 5/17/2011
7889. The Effects Of A Secret Leaks 5/18/2011
7890. Birthmark 5/18/2011
7891. Piddled In Pits 5/18/2011
7892. Just Row 5/18/2011
7893. Only God Knows How That Goes 5/18/2011
7894. Push And Pull 5/18/2011
7895. People Like To Keep A Heat Provoked 5/18/2011
7896. Concrete As Your Convictions 5/18/2011
7897. Narrowed 5/18/2011
7898. Staying Swift On My Feet Keeps Me Peaceful 5/18/2011
7899. You Asked For This 5/18/2011
7900. I Wouldn'T Want You To Miss It 5/18/2011
7901. Following A Bouncing Ball 5/18/2011
7902. A Lot Of Issues To Address 5/18/2011
7903. If Someone Loved Leaves They Leave 4/25/2011
7904. The Process 5/18/2011
7905. If You Have The Nerve To Listen 4/25/2011
7906. Deaf To Voices 5/19/2011
7907. I Rule 5/19/2011
7908. This Being Human Business 5/19/2011
7909. When They Initiate A Tension 5/19/2011
7910. Having Patience Works 5/19/2011
7911. Dumbfounding Those With A Nose Disease 5/19/2011
7912. Come On And Get A Big Piece 5/19/2011
7913. Just Gimme Whatcha Got 5/19/2011
7914. Impeccably Dressed And Prepared 5/19/2011
7915. On A One To One Need To Know Basis 5/19/2011
7916. I May Get Misty Eyed 5/19/2011
7917. Disgusting Trash 5/19/2011
7918. Those Middle Class Days 5/20/2011
7919. Two Meet To Discuss 5/20/2011
7920. I'D Like To See What Makes You Qualified 5/20/2011

Comments about Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • Elena Toledo Elena Toledo (3/12/2009 5:24:00 PM)

    Great and touching poem. This is very well penned and put together. I love it.

    thanks for sharing

    God bless you

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  • ~ Jon London ~ (6/27/2008 3:58:00 PM)

    Lawrence has the expression-ate magic of a genius, he has an outstanding quality, his ability to create such remarkable imagery in his fine writes, will hold the reader and leave them wanting more....If you like poetry of the highest standard...Lawrence is the man to read......sit back and enjoy the ride...............Lawrence Pertillar can effortlessly create the perfect journey into lushes loveliness for you to sit and enjoy fantastically written expression.

    All the very best

    Jon. London

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  • Chad Halle (1/2/2008 10:16:00 PM)

    Your poems make me move, I enjoy them very much so.

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  • Faith Elizabeth Brigham (4/30/2006 11:00:00 AM)

    Lawrence-You have so much talent and have always been one of favorite poets here. You have a wonderful style and are a true poet!

    All my best-Faith

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  • Prasetya Utama Prasetya Utama (3/17/2006 1:56:00 AM)

    Hello, How do you do? I had been visit and read your poem.
    Fine and exciting poem. Would you like to visit and read my poem.
    Kindly regard,
    Pras.

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Best Poem of Lawrence S. Pertillar

$5 A Barrel Of What?

Oil?
Now sold at what?
Five dollars a barrel?
This is an immediate sign,
That something is not going too well.
Has anyone communicated this,
To those who chose this direction?
And they seem to be okay with this decision?
There just will be more greed.
With those who once had it made in the shade...
To stand with others who demand to feed their needs.
And you all know how improbable that is going to be?
Who is going to touch us anyway?
All Mercedes will be curbed.
And Bentleys will be driven by those deserving.
Well...
Why the gloomy ...

Read the full of $5 A Barrel Of What?

You Are No Longer There!

I no longer hold you like I held you
When I held you...
I no longer want to...in my mind.
I no longer see you like I see you
When I saw you...
I no longer do that, with my time!

Lemonade kisses I licked we onced shared,
I don't even want them anymore...I'm full!