Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 109,893 Points (Connecticut)

Lawrence S. Pertillar Poems

8801. Retro-Active Practices 11/17/2014
8802. Inspected To Then Carefully Select 11/17/2014
8803. Romanced Ideals 11/17/2014
8804. Equal Comfort 11/18/2014
8805. Glossed Over Cracks 11/18/2014
8806. I Have Been Right Here 11/18/2014
8807. Mentally Abandoned 11/19/2014
8808. 2015 11/19/2014
8809. Forget About Who Did What To Get 11/19/2014
8810. It 'Only' Took Fifty Years 11/20/2014
8811. Bogus Are Your Deeds 11/20/2014
8812. An Agreement To End Stupidity 11/20/2014
8813. They Don'T Know Me 11/14/2014
8814. Endeavors And Those Efforts 11/14/2014
8815. Hacked 11/14/2014
8816. A Natural Part Of A Normal Life 11/22/2014
8817. Loving Is A Wish 11/22/2014
8818. Easy It Is To Forget 11/22/2014
8819. Often I Am Reminded 11/22/2014
8820. 24/7 11/24/2014
8821. Wild Is The Churning Of The Winds 11/24/2014
8822. Kept Grief To Accept 11/9/2014
8823. Ending Deficiencies 11/25/2014
8824. Blessings I Received 11/25/2014
8825. Revolving Doors 11/27/2014
8826. A Hypocrite That Contradicts 11/27/2014
8827. Lifetime Memberships 11/27/2014
8828. This...'Real' You 11/27/2014
8829. Wicked Intentions 11/27/2014
8830. With The Deepest Of Respect 11/29/2014
8831. Gone Is The Sting 11/29/2014
8832. Famed Gained 12/5/2014
8833. The Escalation Of Truth 12/5/2014
8834. Too Precious To Purchase 12/5/2014
8835. Perceptions Have Been Diseased 12/7/2014
8836. You Didn'T Pay Me 12/7/2014
8837. In Limited Quantity 12/7/2014
8838. Sugar Cubes 12/7/2014
8839. Breaking Their Backs 11/30/2014
8840. A Job God Has Already Done 11/30/2014

Comments about Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • Elena Toledo Elena Toledo (3/12/2009 5:24:00 PM)

    Great and touching poem. This is very well penned and put together. I love it.

    thanks for sharing

    God bless you

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  • ~ Jon London ~ (6/27/2008 3:58:00 PM)

    Lawrence has the expression-ate magic of a genius, he has an outstanding quality, his ability to create such remarkable imagery in his fine writes, will hold the reader and leave them wanting more....If you like poetry of the highest standard...Lawrence is the man to read......sit back and enjoy the ride...............Lawrence Pertillar can effortlessly create the perfect journey into lushes loveliness for you to sit and enjoy fantastically written expression.

    All the very best

    Jon. London

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  • Chad Halle (1/2/2008 10:16:00 PM)

    Your poems make me move, I enjoy them very much so.

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  • Faith Elizabeth Brigham (4/30/2006 11:00:00 AM)

    Lawrence-You have so much talent and have always been one of favorite poets here. You have a wonderful style and are a true poet!

    All my best-Faith

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  • Prasetya Utama Prasetya Utama (3/17/2006 1:56:00 AM)

    Hello, How do you do? I had been visit and read your poem.
    Fine and exciting poem. Would you like to visit and read my poem.
    Kindly regard,
    Pras.

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Best Poem of Lawrence S. Pertillar

A Broken Heart Within

A broken heart within me knows,
What loneliness is...
When it is left to linger,
And slowly grows to wither in wishes!

A happiness living outside is dismissed.
For what it is.
Because it isn't felt,
From inside...
With a gladness that appears.

It's much too late to date a memory!
When fading ushers its leaving.
No one else can see it drift.
Yet an emptiness is hinged...
To a pain remaining that is grieving,
Within.

Time gone,
Like the wind blows,
Never returns again!
Not to visit in inquisitive sits...
With the one ...

Read the full of A Broken Heart Within

You Are My Boo...Boo!

You may never know
That I am troubled too.
You may never know that,
Like I do.

You may never see me frown
Or hold a grudge...
But I have been down.
So low I couldn't budge!