Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 110,252 Points (Connecticut)

Lawrence S. Pertillar Poems

10801. Everywhere There Is A Medic 6/9/2012
10802. There To Share With A Getting 6/9/2012
10803. Without A Drumroll Or A Cheering Audience 6/9/2012
10804. Left To Go Untouched 6/9/2012
10805. With A Seeking To Be Encouraged 6/9/2012
10806. Over A Crock Of Mixed Soup 6/9/2012
10807. Strengthened Faith 6/9/2012
10808. Your Approach 6/9/2012
10809. One With A Twisted Tongue 6/9/2012
10810. With Acceptance As If Selected 6/10/2012
10811. A Gratuity Paid 6/10/2012
10812. Was 6/10/2012
10813. The Keeping Up Of Appearances 6/10/2012
10814. Those Capitalistic Blues 6/10/2012
10815. Simple And A Lot More Basic 6/10/2012
10816. They Seek To Be Understood 6/11/2012
10817. Worthless 6/11/2012
10818. Limited By That Which Is Not 6/11/2012
10819. Ignoring Many Hints Of Trouble 6/11/2012
10820. Looking For More Obstacles 6/11/2012
10821. Start To Move 6/11/2012
10822. Surface Viewers 6/11/2012
10823. Who Sent You Here? 6/13/2012
10824. I'M Tired Of Giving It 6/13/2012
10825. With You Not In My Mind 6/13/2012
10826. Money Green 6/13/2012
10827. Sweet And Oozing With Charm 6/13/2012
10828. Peanut Butter Lovers 6/13/2012
10829. If Johnny Only Had An Eight Inch Foot 6/13/2012
10830. Unaware. Of What? 6/13/2012
10831. Seen To Be Subdued 6/13/2012
10832. An Obviousness In The Existence 6/13/2012
10833. In This Existence 6/14/2012
10834. Effortless But It Isn'T 6/14/2012
10835. Interpreted As Conformity 6/14/2012
10836. I Exaggerate Not 6/14/2012
10837. If You Bake It 6/14/2012
10838. Is It Time 6/14/2012
10839. Holding Onto A Discipline 6/14/2012
10840. Manicured And Stretched Out Hands 6/14/2012

Comments about Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • Elena Toledo Elena Toledo (3/12/2009 5:24:00 PM)

    Great and touching poem. This is very well penned and put together. I love it.

    thanks for sharing

    God bless you

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  • ~ Jon London ~ (6/27/2008 3:58:00 PM)

    Lawrence has the expression-ate magic of a genius, he has an outstanding quality, his ability to create such remarkable imagery in his fine writes, will hold the reader and leave them wanting more....If you like poetry of the highest standard...Lawrence is the man to read......sit back and enjoy the ride...............Lawrence Pertillar can effortlessly create the perfect journey into lushes loveliness for you to sit and enjoy fantastically written expression.

    All the very best

    Jon. London

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  • Chad Halle (1/2/2008 10:16:00 PM)

    Your poems make me move, I enjoy them very much so.

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  • Faith Elizabeth Brigham (4/30/2006 11:00:00 AM)

    Lawrence-You have so much talent and have always been one of favorite poets here. You have a wonderful style and are a true poet!

    All my best-Faith

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  • Prasetya Utama Prasetya Utama (3/17/2006 1:56:00 AM)

    Hello, How do you do? I had been visit and read your poem.
    Fine and exciting poem. Would you like to visit and read my poem.
    Kindly regard,
    Pras.

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Best Poem of Lawrence S. Pertillar

A Broken Heart Within

A broken heart within me knows,
What loneliness is...
When it is left to linger,
And slowly grows to wither in wishes!

A happiness living outside is dismissed.
For what it is.
Because it isn't felt,
From inside...
With a gladness that appears.

It's much too late to date a memory!
When fading ushers its leaving.
No one else can see it drift.
Yet an emptiness is hinged...
To a pain remaining that is grieving,
Within.

Time gone,
Like the wind blows,
Never returns again!
Not to visit in inquisitive sits...
With the one ...

Read the full of A Broken Heart Within

You Are No Longer There!

I no longer hold you like I held you
When I held you...
I no longer want to...in my mind.
I no longer see you like I see you
When I saw you...
I no longer do that, with my time!

Lemonade kisses I licked we onced shared,
I don't even want them anymore...I'm full!