Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 110,181 Points (Connecticut)

Lawrence S. Pertillar Poems

11521. Renovated Much Too Late 11/10/2012
11522. Those Who Habitually Lie 11/10/2012
11523. So Much More 11/10/2012
11524. I Need To Feel You Near 11/11/2012
11525. Pieces Now Connecting 11/11/2012
11526. Clear As Its Ever Been 11/11/2012
11527. Leaders Of The Neighborhood 11/12/2012
11528. The Bottom Has Been Knocked Out 11/12/2012
11529. I Have Searched My Soul 11/12/2012
11530. Deposits I Have Made 11/12/2012
11531. They Are Not That Kind Of People 10/26/2012
11532. Narcissism Is A Sickness 11/13/2012
11533. No Matter What The Method Used 11/13/2012
11534. Traumatized By Their Own Denials 11/13/2012
11535. Experiencing Those Interests 11/13/2012
11536. Take Your Life Off Pause 11/14/2012
11537. People Love To Intimidate 11/14/2012
11538. From A Limited Perspective 11/14/2012
11539. One Positively Living 11/14/2012
11540. Consider It Done 11/16/2012
11541. Nothing Left To Auction 11/16/2012
11542. Leaving Few Left To Admit Themselves Fools 11/16/2012
11543. Those Yesterdays Gone 11/16/2012
11544. If One Admits It 11/16/2012
11545. In The Hopes To Them An Attention Is Given 11/17/2012
11546. Competent And Competitive 11/17/2012
11547. Fearing The Honesty 11/17/2012
11548. Qualified To Do 11/17/2012
11549. Nibbling Away 11/17/2012
11550. Done To Do With A Seriousness 11/17/2012
11551. Chasing Their Dreams 11/18/2012
11552. I Don'T Expect Respect 11/18/2012
11553. That Which Has Never Existed 11/18/2012
11554. Just Curious 11/18/2012
11555. People Mediocre Later Weep 11/18/2012
11556. Modesty 11/18/2012
11557. A Taste With A Better Flavor 11/18/2012
11558. On 'This' Thanksgiving Day 11/18/2012
11559. The Increase Of Its Popularity 11/19/2012
11560. Welcoming To Set New Challenges 11/19/2012

Comments about Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • Elena Toledo Elena Toledo (3/12/2009 5:24:00 PM)

    Great and touching poem. This is very well penned and put together. I love it.

    thanks for sharing

    God bless you

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  • ~ Jon London ~ (6/27/2008 3:58:00 PM)

    Lawrence has the expression-ate magic of a genius, he has an outstanding quality, his ability to create such remarkable imagery in his fine writes, will hold the reader and leave them wanting more....If you like poetry of the highest standard...Lawrence is the man to read......sit back and enjoy the ride...............Lawrence Pertillar can effortlessly create the perfect journey into lushes loveliness for you to sit and enjoy fantastically written expression.

    All the very best

    Jon. London

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  • Chad Halle (1/2/2008 10:16:00 PM)

    Your poems make me move, I enjoy them very much so.

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  • Faith Elizabeth Brigham (4/30/2006 11:00:00 AM)

    Lawrence-You have so much talent and have always been one of favorite poets here. You have a wonderful style and are a true poet!

    All my best-Faith

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  • Prasetya Utama Prasetya Utama (3/17/2006 1:56:00 AM)

    Hello, How do you do? I had been visit and read your poem.
    Fine and exciting poem. Would you like to visit and read my poem.
    Kindly regard,
    Pras.

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Best Poem of Lawrence S. Pertillar

A Broken Heart Within

A broken heart within me knows,
What loneliness is...
When it is left to linger,
And slowly grows to wither in wishes!

A happiness living outside is dismissed.
For what it is.
Because it isn't felt,
From inside...
With a gladness that appears.

It's much too late to date a memory!
When fading ushers its leaving.
No one else can see it drift.
Yet an emptiness is hinged...
To a pain remaining that is grieving,
Within.

Time gone,
Like the wind blows,
Never returns again!
Not to visit in inquisitive sits...
With the one ...

Read the full of A Broken Heart Within

You Know The Ones

Aren't you tired of the folks who pass judgement?
You know the ones...
Quick to tell you how you should live
Always taking handouts from those they take for granted,
Criticizing the people who take their time to give.

Aren't you sick of those who waste your time to gossip?
You know the ones,
Glued to phones like weapons,