Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 110,252 Points (Connecticut)

Lawrence S. Pertillar Poems

12041. Overheard Complaining 3/17/2013
12042. Few People Are Not Liars 3/17/2013
12043. Eyes Bright Upon The Universe Are Widening 3/17/2013
12044. Yesterday Perhaps But Today That Aint Happening 3/17/2013
12045. Under-Used 3/17/2013
12046. A Reality You Have Yet To Expose 3/17/2013
12047. Giver And Doer Of Deeds 3/18/2013
12048. Leave Behind The Humdrum 3/18/2013
12049. Many Fix Their Focus 3/18/2013
12050. Unless A Chemistry One Has Is Addressed 3/19/2013
12051. With A Scanning Many Do 3/19/2013
12052. Effervescent Efforts 3/19/2013
12053. Received By Increasing Debits 3/19/2013
12054. When Looking Back 3/19/2013
12055. Heartbreak Seems So Easy 3/20/2013
12056. Too Many Weak On The Streets Seek 3/20/2013
12057. The Benefits They Get 3/21/2013
12058. That's What I'Ve Been Trying To Tell You 3/21/2013
12059. Sweetened Commodities Sold To Be Treats 3/21/2013
12060. People Are Not Prepared For This 3/21/2013
12061. Demands To Keep Fear 3/21/2013
12062. Speeding Too Rapidly To Limit Or Condense 3/21/2013
12063. To Never Forget The Having Of It 3/21/2013
12064. Sensuous 3/21/2013
12065. Expect Debt 3/21/2013
12066. 'Your' Gift 3/22/2013
12067. Dare Dare Double Dare 3/22/2013
12068. Voices Heard Above The Wall 3/23/2013
12069. If I Wanted To Choose 3/23/2013
12070. That Sharing Of Our Own Ignorance 3/23/2013
12071. People Can'T Give Their Conflicts Up 3/23/2013
12072. You'Ve Got To Choose With Choice 3/23/2013
12073. Everything About This I Adore 3/23/2013
12074. I Refuse To Have My Mind Rattled 3/23/2013
12075. Down To Earth And Obvious 3/23/2013
12076. On The Lurch To Attack 3/23/2013
12077. Whenever One Feels In The Mood 3/24/2013
12078. Accustomed To Challenging Obstacles 3/24/2013
12079. My Neighbors Are Envious 3/24/2013
12080. Only If The Doing It Shows! 3/24/2013

Comments about Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • Elena Toledo Elena Toledo (3/12/2009 5:24:00 PM)

    Great and touching poem. This is very well penned and put together. I love it.

    thanks for sharing

    God bless you

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  • ~ Jon London ~ (6/27/2008 3:58:00 PM)

    Lawrence has the expression-ate magic of a genius, he has an outstanding quality, his ability to create such remarkable imagery in his fine writes, will hold the reader and leave them wanting more....If you like poetry of the highest standard...Lawrence is the man to read......sit back and enjoy the ride...............Lawrence Pertillar can effortlessly create the perfect journey into lushes loveliness for you to sit and enjoy fantastically written expression.

    All the very best

    Jon. London

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  • Chad Halle (1/2/2008 10:16:00 PM)

    Your poems make me move, I enjoy them very much so.

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  • Faith Elizabeth Brigham (4/30/2006 11:00:00 AM)

    Lawrence-You have so much talent and have always been one of favorite poets here. You have a wonderful style and are a true poet!

    All my best-Faith

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  • Prasetya Utama Prasetya Utama (3/17/2006 1:56:00 AM)

    Hello, How do you do? I had been visit and read your poem.
    Fine and exciting poem. Would you like to visit and read my poem.
    Kindly regard,
    Pras.

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Best Poem of Lawrence S. Pertillar

A Broken Heart Within

A broken heart within me knows,
What loneliness is...
When it is left to linger,
And slowly grows to wither in wishes!

A happiness living outside is dismissed.
For what it is.
Because it isn't felt,
From inside...
With a gladness that appears.

It's much too late to date a memory!
When fading ushers its leaving.
No one else can see it drift.
Yet an emptiness is hinged...
To a pain remaining that is grieving,
Within.

Time gone,
Like the wind blows,
Never returns again!
Not to visit in inquisitive sits...
With the one ...

Read the full of A Broken Heart Within

Zapped

When a mind is shut...
Don't try to pry it open.
It is better where it is decaying,
Left alone.
Leave it!
There is hope with others showing
Signs of response.
Those who are replusive...
Are already dead anyway!