Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 110,252 Points (Connecticut)

Lawrence S. Pertillar Poems

12561. Determined To Be Unqualified 7/9/2013
12562. Ouch! It Still Hurts 7/9/2013
12563. Knuckleheads 7/10/2013
12564. A Continuance Of Inflicting Needless Conflict 7/10/2013
12565. Be Missed 7/10/2013
12566. Effort Takes 7/10/2013
12567. Not To Preach But To Teach 7/11/2013
12568. The Past Is Left At Last 7/11/2013
12569. Suitable For Scrutiny 7/12/2013
12570. Are You On A Mission? 7/12/2013
12571. If I Condoned The Making For Them Impressions 7/12/2013
12572. False Representations 7/12/2013
12573. A Thick Head To Hit Against Bricks 7/12/2013
12574. Willing To Embarrass Themselves 7/12/2013
12575. Is This... A Metaphor? 7/12/2013
12576. Sitting On A Fence 7/13/2013
12577. To Promote A Provoking 7/13/2013
12578. Is It Intentional? 7/13/2013
12579. Given A Sequel 7/13/2013
12580. Emulating Themselves 7/13/2013
12581. Is This What You Choose? 7/13/2013
12582. That Havoc You Can Have 7/13/2013
12583. In The Presence Of Truth 7/13/2013
12584. I Lost My Rose Colored Glasses 7/14/2013
12585. The Best Poet Yet? 7/14/2013
12586. Validated As Originality 7/14/2013
12587. When Were The Facts Ever Accepted? 7/20/2013
12588. Teased With Kept Beliefs 7/20/2013
12589. With Wishes Desired 7/20/2013
12590. Found Offensive To Those Told 7/20/2013
12591. Motivation 7/21/2013
12592. Oops There It Is 7/21/2013
12593. The Sky Is Falling. The Sky Is Falling 7/21/2013
12594. Symbolic But Not With Proof To Drop 7/21/2013
12595. With The Faith I Keep 7/21/2013
12596. Social Madness 7/21/2013
12597. Intended Not To Be Edited 7/20/2013
12598. 'I'M Not Crazy. Really, I'M Not' 7/22/2013
12599. Drag It Somewhere Else 7/22/2013
12600. Kept With Purpose And Focus 7/22/2013

Comments about Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • Elena Toledo Elena Toledo (3/12/2009 5:24:00 PM)

    Great and touching poem. This is very well penned and put together. I love it.

    thanks for sharing

    God bless you

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  • ~ Jon London ~ (6/27/2008 3:58:00 PM)

    Lawrence has the expression-ate magic of a genius, he has an outstanding quality, his ability to create such remarkable imagery in his fine writes, will hold the reader and leave them wanting more....If you like poetry of the highest standard...Lawrence is the man to read......sit back and enjoy the ride...............Lawrence Pertillar can effortlessly create the perfect journey into lushes loveliness for you to sit and enjoy fantastically written expression.

    All the very best

    Jon. London

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  • Chad Halle (1/2/2008 10:16:00 PM)

    Your poems make me move, I enjoy them very much so.

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  • Faith Elizabeth Brigham (4/30/2006 11:00:00 AM)

    Lawrence-You have so much talent and have always been one of favorite poets here. You have a wonderful style and are a true poet!

    All my best-Faith

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  • Prasetya Utama Prasetya Utama (3/17/2006 1:56:00 AM)

    Hello, How do you do? I had been visit and read your poem.
    Fine and exciting poem. Would you like to visit and read my poem.
    Kindly regard,
    Pras.

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Best Poem of Lawrence S. Pertillar

(the) Bigger Lie

Which liars deny,
They did or did not tell...
The bigger lie.
Or acknowledge any used,
To coverup any known!
Only shows that lies,
Are being told!
And on a daily basis,
They have been sold!

The entire system created,
Has been built on them.
Where has the honesty ever thrived...
When even the churches,
Are dens of sins!

Integrity seems to be known by those ostracized.
Those who speak with a truthfulness,
Who are character assassinated...
And dragged through the mud,
Despised.

A society that is witnessed falling ...

Read the full of (the) Bigger Lie

Slaves To Debts

No freedom to live it,
Is without expense.
And becoming a slave to money,
Affording a welcoming of decadence...
Few can ignore,
'The gotta have it and now' seduction.

That kind of ongoing production produces,
Teasing temptations.