Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 109,893 Points (Connecticut)

Lawrence S. Pertillar Poems

12641. Open To Comprehend 1/22/2009
12642. Quieted Lips 1/22/2009
12643. Narrow Vision 1/22/2009
12644. Loss Of Opportunity To Correct 1/22/2009
12645. Has It Been Depleted? 1/22/2009
12646. In 'My' World I Am The Do Do 1/23/2009
12647. Unified Comprehension 1/23/2009
12648. Restrictions Will Be Lifted 1/23/2009
12649. Like A Joy Ride That Leaves Them Tingling 1/23/2009
12650. That Which God Has Given 1/23/2009
12651. Yet With That Said 1/23/2009
12652. This Stuff Ain'T Fresh 1/24/2009
12653. Foreclosed Dreams 1/24/2009
12654. Sent The Same Gift 1/25/2009
12655. Now That It Is Shown 1/25/2009
12656. Keep Yourself Accessible 1/19/2009
12657. We Connect To The Abundance 1/20/2009
12658. We Can Only Be Proud Together 1/20/2009
12659. Voices Growing And Getting Closer 1/20/2009
12660. Flashbacks 1/20/2009
12661. Conscious Enough To Notice 1/25/2009
12662. Appetizers Laced 1/25/2009
12663. It Will Take Decades 1/25/2009
12664. Quick Fix 1/25/2009
12665. Spring Brings Fresh Buds 1/25/2009
12666. Talent That Is Given 1/26/2009
12667. Empowered 1/26/2009
12668. Of Stimulating Packages 1/26/2009
12669. Shunned To Slander Those Wholesome 1/26/2009
12670. Replenish And Dispense 1/27/2009
12671. My Own Stranger Sometimes 1/27/2009
12672. North Capitol Of Regions 1/27/2009
12673. Push Push And Pop It 1/27/2009
12674. Techno Madness 1/27/2009
12675. You Had Me Tasting Hate! 1/20/2009
12676. Not That Deep Of A Sleeper 1/20/2009
12677. Muscular And Thick 1/20/2009
12678. Keepin'-Th'Big-Ball Bouncin' 1/21/2009
12679. Many Seek Status 1/21/2009
12680. Petty Zest And Zealers 1/21/2009

Comments about Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • Elena Toledo Elena Toledo (3/12/2009 5:24:00 PM)

    Great and touching poem. This is very well penned and put together. I love it.

    thanks for sharing

    God bless you

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  • ~ Jon London ~ (6/27/2008 3:58:00 PM)

    Lawrence has the expression-ate magic of a genius, he has an outstanding quality, his ability to create such remarkable imagery in his fine writes, will hold the reader and leave them wanting more....If you like poetry of the highest standard...Lawrence is the man to read......sit back and enjoy the ride...............Lawrence Pertillar can effortlessly create the perfect journey into lushes loveliness for you to sit and enjoy fantastically written expression.

    All the very best

    Jon. London

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  • Chad Halle (1/2/2008 10:16:00 PM)

    Your poems make me move, I enjoy them very much so.

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  • Faith Elizabeth Brigham (4/30/2006 11:00:00 AM)

    Lawrence-You have so much talent and have always been one of favorite poets here. You have a wonderful style and are a true poet!

    All my best-Faith

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  • Prasetya Utama Prasetya Utama (3/17/2006 1:56:00 AM)

    Hello, How do you do? I had been visit and read your poem.
    Fine and exciting poem. Would you like to visit and read my poem.
    Kindly regard,
    Pras.

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Best Poem of Lawrence S. Pertillar

A Broken Heart Within

A broken heart within me knows,
What loneliness is...
When it is left to linger,
And slowly grows to wither in wishes!

A happiness living outside is dismissed.
For what it is.
Because it isn't felt,
From inside...
With a gladness that appears.

It's much too late to date a memory!
When fading ushers its leaving.
No one else can see it drift.
Yet an emptiness is hinged...
To a pain remaining that is grieving,
Within.

Time gone,
Like the wind blows,
Never returns again!
Not to visit in inquisitive sits...
With the one ...

Read the full of A Broken Heart Within

Ghastly Ghoulish Rule

Why be dismayed,
By the eggs these chickens laid?
You were told that the rooster
Was a goosing hooting booster.
From the beginning it was said,
Everything he touched he poisoned dead!
And STILL you let him in your coop?
With all his stink and all his poot!
You should have given him long the boot!