Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 109,583 Points (Connecticut)

Lawrence S. Pertillar Poems

13401. Stunned With A Stinging Into Love 7/6/2009
13402. Into Direct Eye Contact 7/6/2009
13403. One Has Standards To Maintain 7/6/2009
13404. The Growling Is Effective 7/6/2009
13405. Needy Independentness 7/7/2009
13406. Seated Next To Hypocrites 7/7/2009
13407. Unlimited Treasure Trove 7/7/2009
13408. And The King Of Pop Receives His Rest 7/7/2009
13409. Regrets Met To Forgive We Must Forget 7/7/2009
13410. Touching 7/7/2009
13411. You'Ve Got A Stuck Up Butt 7/7/2009
13412. Get That Fat Back Offa My Rack 7/7/2009
13413. Every Moment Felt Kept Precious 7/7/2009
13414. How Deep Can An Ignorance Get 7/7/2009
13415. Racists 7/7/2009
13416. Am I All Those Things Meant? 7/8/2009
13417. Much More Than Just Jacksons 7/4/2009
13418. If That Is Possible 7/4/2009
13419. Get Up. Shut Up. And Move 7/4/2009
13420. Give Me No More Booty 7/4/2009
13421. Just Your Average Genius 7/4/2009
13422. Giving And The Taking Was A Lesson Saved 7/4/2009
13423. Not In Situations Like These 7/4/2009
13424. Baited By Ratings (The Defamation Game) 7/8/2009
13425. Life Lived Moves On 7/8/2009
13426. Of A Much Needed Self Evaluation 7/8/2009
13427. Half Mast Flags 7/8/2009
13428. Comprehending Your Success 7/8/2009
13429. Obviousness Of It 7/8/2009
13430. This Has Got To Be For The Love! 7/9/2009
13431. They Can Not Do That On Their Own 7/9/2009
13432. She Has Tremendous Hands 7/9/2009
13433. Toes 7/3/2009
13434. You Wouldn'T Know 7/3/2009
13435. Basket Case 7/3/2009
13436. No One Can Get Close To Her 7/3/2009
13437. I Am Here To See You Through 7/9/2009
13438. Less Involved In It 7/9/2009
13439. It Is Because Of The Media 7/9/2009
13440. No One Tries To Understand 7/9/2009

Comments about Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • Elena Toledo Elena Toledo (3/12/2009 5:24:00 PM)

    Great and touching poem. This is very well penned and put together. I love it.

    thanks for sharing

    God bless you

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  • ~ Jon London ~ (6/27/2008 3:58:00 PM)

    Lawrence has the expression-ate magic of a genius, he has an outstanding quality, his ability to create such remarkable imagery in his fine writes, will hold the reader and leave them wanting more....If you like poetry of the highest standard...Lawrence is the man to read......sit back and enjoy the ride...............Lawrence Pertillar can effortlessly create the perfect journey into lushes loveliness for you to sit and enjoy fantastically written expression.

    All the very best

    Jon. London

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  • Chad Halle (1/2/2008 10:16:00 PM)

    Your poems make me move, I enjoy them very much so.

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  • Faith Elizabeth Brigham (4/30/2006 11:00:00 AM)

    Lawrence-You have so much talent and have always been one of favorite poets here. You have a wonderful style and are a true poet!

    All my best-Faith

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  • Prasetya Utama Prasetya Utama (3/17/2006 1:56:00 AM)

    Hello, How do you do? I had been visit and read your poem.
    Fine and exciting poem. Would you like to visit and read my poem.
    Kindly regard,

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Best Poem of Lawrence S. Pertillar

A Broken Heart Within

A broken heart within me knows,
What loneliness is...
When it is left to linger,
And slowly grows to wither in wishes!

A happiness living outside is dismissed.
For what it is.
Because it isn't felt,
From inside...
With a gladness that appears.

It's much too late to date a memory!
When fading ushers its leaving.
No one else can see it drift.
Yet an emptiness is hinged...
To a pain remaining that is grieving,

Time gone,
Like the wind blows,
Never returns again!
Not to visit in inquisitive sits...
With the one ...

Read the full of A Broken Heart Within

Ghastly Ghoulish Rule

Why be dismayed,
By the eggs these chickens laid?
You were told that the rooster
Was a goosing hooting booster.
From the beginning it was said,
Everything he touched he poisoned dead!
And STILL you let him in your coop?
With all his stink and all his poot!
You should have given him long the boot!