Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 110,038 Points (Connecticut)

Lawrence S. Pertillar Poems

1721. Hookey Rookie 3/5/2008
1722. The We Poem And Other Compositions 3/5/2008
1723. Initiation You Know Will Irritate 3/5/2008
1724. Unscripted Verses 3/5/2008
1725. Fingers Crossed 3/6/2008
1726. The Pathetic Apatheticness Of Apathetics 3/6/2008
1727. Gone Too Far To Prove 3/6/2008
1728. Finder's Fees 3/6/2008
1729. We Can Meet To Get A Piece Of Familiar Meat 3/6/2008
1730. Knowing We Can Still Do That 3/6/2008
1731. Regardless Of The Lack Of Proof 3/7/2008
1732. Package Of Its Passage 3/7/2008
1733. Why Did They Not Move? 3/7/2008
1734. Seeping From The Last Of Merit 3/7/2008
1735. Is Your Smile A Clue? 3/7/2008
1736. Drugged In A Self Love 3/7/2008
1737. Those Tease And Chase Days Are Done 3/7/2008
1738. Felt That Without Description 3/7/2008
1739. Temptations To Numb Pain 3/7/2008
1740. Many Seeking Antidotes 3/7/2008
1741. Those Who Have Been Victims 3/7/2008
1742. No One Comprehends 3/8/2008
1743. More Of These Gifts 3/8/2008
1744. Objects 3/8/2008
1745. There Is Too Much To Be Enjoyed 3/8/2008
1746. Rhythmic Sedations 3/9/2008
1747. Your Success 3/9/2008
1748. You Will Remember My Strength 3/9/2008
1749. It Only Stalls The Undoing 3/10/2008
1750. Leaving Was The Best Thing 3/10/2008
1751. Nuisance 3/10/2008
1752. Thickhead 3/10/2008
1753. What Did You Think? 3/10/2008
1754. Supplies My Need 3/10/2008
1755. Wrestle With Distractions 3/10/2008
1756. Sobered 3/10/2008
1757. Penny For My Thoughts? 3/10/2008
1758. Devalued 3/10/2008
1759. Moral Fiber 3/10/2008
1760. Immaculate Myths 3/11/2008

Comments about Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • Elena Toledo Elena Toledo (3/12/2009 5:24:00 PM)

    Great and touching poem. This is very well penned and put together. I love it.

    thanks for sharing

    God bless you

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  • ~ Jon London ~ (6/27/2008 3:58:00 PM)

    Lawrence has the expression-ate magic of a genius, he has an outstanding quality, his ability to create such remarkable imagery in his fine writes, will hold the reader and leave them wanting more....If you like poetry of the highest standard...Lawrence is the man to read......sit back and enjoy the ride...............Lawrence Pertillar can effortlessly create the perfect journey into lushes loveliness for you to sit and enjoy fantastically written expression.

    All the very best

    Jon. London

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  • Chad Halle (1/2/2008 10:16:00 PM)

    Your poems make me move, I enjoy them very much so.

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  • Faith Elizabeth Brigham (4/30/2006 11:00:00 AM)

    Lawrence-You have so much talent and have always been one of favorite poets here. You have a wonderful style and are a true poet!

    All my best-Faith

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  • Prasetya Utama Prasetya Utama (3/17/2006 1:56:00 AM)

    Hello, How do you do? I had been visit and read your poem.
    Fine and exciting poem. Would you like to visit and read my poem.
    Kindly regard,

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Best Poem of Lawrence S. Pertillar

$5 A Barrel Of What?

Now sold at what?
Five dollars a barrel?
This is an immediate sign,
That something is not going too well.
Has anyone communicated this,
To those who chose this direction?
And they seem to be okay with this decision?
There just will be more greed.
With those who once had it made in the shade...
To stand with others who demand to feed their needs.
And you all know how improbable that is going to be?
Who is going to touch us anyway?
All Mercedes will be curbed.
And Bentleys will be driven by those deserving.
Why the gloomy ...

Read the full of $5 A Barrel Of What?

You Know The Ones

Aren't you tired of the folks who pass judgement?
You know the ones...
Quick to tell you how you should live
Always taking handouts from those they take for granted,
Criticizing the people who take their time to give.

Aren't you sick of those who waste your time to gossip?
You know the ones,
Glued to phones like weapons,