Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 109,583 Points (Connecticut)

Lawrence S. Pertillar Poems

17841. Once Closed Now Opened 8/1/2011
17842. Etched In Deep Sorrow 8/1/2011
17843. More Than You Will Ever Know 8/1/2011
17844. Failures 8/2/2011
17845. Of Course It Is Unconscionable 8/2/2011
17846. It's Not Realistic 8/2/2011
17847. Debonair 8/2/2011
17848. I'Ll Take Care Of Yours, First 8/2/2011
17849. Discouraged From Mentioning Them 8/2/2011
17850. Today... The Thought Of You Disgust Me To Tears 8/3/2011
17851. No One Would Notice 8/3/2011
17852. With A Convincing Done To Others 8/2/2011
17853. As If You Were A Window With Dust And Smudges On It 8/3/2011
17854. No Intentions Of Reliving Stale Memories 8/3/2011
17855. Which Wish For You Is 'More' Essential? 8/3/2011
17856. First Class Passengers 8/4/2011
17857. Exquisite Details May Be Missed 8/3/2011
17858. Massively Triggered 8/4/2011
17859. The Moment I Say Chocolate 8/3/2011
17860. The Devotion Given To Our Disciplines 8/3/2011
17861. Regardless Of How It Is Perceived 8/3/2011
17862. This Vision Must Not With Us Stay 8/3/2011
17863. Removing Of Those Shackles Borrowed 8/3/2011
17864. Mixed Fruit 8/4/2011
17865. Never Given Their Just Due Attention 8/4/2011
17866. Relax. Just Observe It For What It Is 8/5/2011
17867. Encouraged To Lie 8/4/2011
17868. Exceptions Made To Created Rules 8/5/2011
17869. Outrageous Demands 8/4/2011
17870. Ingenuous 8/6/2011
17871. With A Prioritized Attention Given 8/6/2011
17872. With Time Given To Whine And Pass Their Judgements 8/6/2011
17873. Why Am I Needing This? 7/27/2011
17874. This Feeding Expected 7/27/2011
17875. Keys To Locks 7/27/2011
17876. The Best Doing Of A Done That I Did And Could Do 7/27/2011
17877. You People Are All Over The Place 7/27/2011
17878. When Caught 7/27/2011
17879. Solidarity 7/27/2011
17880. Don'T Do 'We'. Do 'You' 7/28/2011

Comments about Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • Elena Toledo Elena Toledo (3/12/2009 5:24:00 PM)

    Great and touching poem. This is very well penned and put together. I love it.

    thanks for sharing

    God bless you

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  • ~ Jon London ~ (6/27/2008 3:58:00 PM)

    Lawrence has the expression-ate magic of a genius, he has an outstanding quality, his ability to create such remarkable imagery in his fine writes, will hold the reader and leave them wanting more....If you like poetry of the highest standard...Lawrence is the man to read......sit back and enjoy the ride...............Lawrence Pertillar can effortlessly create the perfect journey into lushes loveliness for you to sit and enjoy fantastically written expression.

    All the very best

    Jon. London

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  • Chad Halle (1/2/2008 10:16:00 PM)

    Your poems make me move, I enjoy them very much so.

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  • Faith Elizabeth Brigham (4/30/2006 11:00:00 AM)

    Lawrence-You have so much talent and have always been one of favorite poets here. You have a wonderful style and are a true poet!

    All my best-Faith

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  • Prasetya Utama Prasetya Utama (3/17/2006 1:56:00 AM)

    Hello, How do you do? I had been visit and read your poem.
    Fine and exciting poem. Would you like to visit and read my poem.
    Kindly regard,

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Best Poem of Lawrence S. Pertillar

$10 A Gallon?

$10 a gallon?
For what?

'Does that really matter now?
When it approached
One dollar per gallon...
You should have voiced your concern then!
Not when your pockets have gotten thin.
And deepened to hold more lint!
You want to make cents?
Put these sunglasses on.
Grab a twig from a bush...
And get to begging!
You might gain some sympathy,
From someone who recognizes you are in disguise.
And they are in the mood,
To share with you their good attitude.
IF they have some of 'that' left! '

Read the full of $10 A Gallon?

Ghastly Ghoulish Rule

Why be dismayed,
By the eggs these chickens laid?
You were told that the rooster
Was a goosing hooting booster.
From the beginning it was said,
Everything he touched he poisoned dead!
And STILL you let him in your coop?
With all his stink and all his poot!
You should have given him long the boot!