Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 110,252 Points (Connecticut)

Lawrence S. Pertillar Poems

19601. Giddy Fit 7/11/2007
19602. Tourist Attraction 7/5/2007
19603. From A Birth Of Duality 7/2/2007
19604. Midnight Fast Approaches 6/11/2007
19605. Churning With Conflicts 6/8/2007
19606. It Can Be Hard To Take 6/1/2007
19607. Championship Games 5/20/2007
19608. More Tweaking To Be Done 5/20/2007
19609. The 'B-E-R'-Ness 5/20/2007
19610. Lack Of Backbone 4/11/2007
19611. Surf For Other Fish 4/3/2007
19612. Influence 3/17/2007
19613. Know You Are Blessed 3/2/2007
19614. Misfit Beatings 1/29/2007
19615. It's Odd We Call You God 1/27/2007
19616. Flexible...And, Resilient You Are! 1/15/2007
19617. Sacrifice And Faith Are My Friends 1/13/2007
19618. In Total Agreement 12/23/2006
19619. Proceed With Caution 12/6/2006
19620. Have The Happiest Of Holidays 11/26/2006
19621. This New England Season 9/9/2006
19622. The Capture 9/6/2006
19623. Platform Plunge 9/12/2006
19624. It Is Now October 9/23/2006
19625. 'Dissed' 9/21/2006
19626. Clean It Up With Bleach 9/15/2006
19627. I Could Arrest You For Disturbing The Peace 8/23/2011
19628. Because There Wasn'T Any 'Ifs' Between Us 10/26/2011
19629. Madness Lived 3/16/2020
19630. Structured To Create -new- 8/12/2020
19631. Seeking Approval -new- 8/12/2020
19632. Painful To Admit -new- 8/12/2020
19633. Drown Me In Your Light 3/25/2015
19634. Just Accepting 3/22/2015
19635. Taking Accountability 2/6/2015
19636. From One To Ten 2/8/2015
19637. Much More There Is To Life 2/17/2015
19638. For All The Good Things 2/12/2015
19639. Up And Down With It 2/12/2015
19640. Accepted To Defend 2/19/2015

Comments about Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • Elena Toledo Elena Toledo (3/12/2009 5:24:00 PM)

    Great and touching poem. This is very well penned and put together. I love it.

    thanks for sharing

    God bless you

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  • ~ Jon London ~ (6/27/2008 3:58:00 PM)

    Lawrence has the expression-ate magic of a genius, he has an outstanding quality, his ability to create such remarkable imagery in his fine writes, will hold the reader and leave them wanting more....If you like poetry of the highest standard...Lawrence is the man to read......sit back and enjoy the ride...............Lawrence Pertillar can effortlessly create the perfect journey into lushes loveliness for you to sit and enjoy fantastically written expression.

    All the very best

    Jon. London

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  • Chad Halle (1/2/2008 10:16:00 PM)

    Your poems make me move, I enjoy them very much so.

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  • Faith Elizabeth Brigham (4/30/2006 11:00:00 AM)

    Lawrence-You have so much talent and have always been one of favorite poets here. You have a wonderful style and are a true poet!

    All my best-Faith

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  • Prasetya Utama Prasetya Utama (3/17/2006 1:56:00 AM)

    Hello, How do you do? I had been visit and read your poem.
    Fine and exciting poem. Would you like to visit and read my poem.
    Kindly regard,

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Best Poem of Lawrence S. Pertillar

A Broken Heart Within

A broken heart within me knows,
What loneliness is...
When it is left to linger,
And slowly grows to wither in wishes!

A happiness living outside is dismissed.
For what it is.
Because it isn't felt,
From inside...
With a gladness that appears.

It's much too late to date a memory!
When fading ushers its leaving.
No one else can see it drift.
Yet an emptiness is hinged...
To a pain remaining that is grieving,

Time gone,
Like the wind blows,
Never returns again!
Not to visit in inquisitive sits...
With the one ...

Read the full of A Broken Heart Within


When a mind is shut...
Don't try to pry it open.
It is better where it is decaying,
Left alone.
Leave it!
There is hope with others showing
Signs of response.
Those who are replusive...
Are already dead anyway!