Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 109,654 Points (Connecticut)

Lawrence S. Pertillar Poems

20241. Letting Things Be As They Should 8/26/2008
20242. Forget It 9/12/2008
20243. Subservient, Submissive...And, Conditioned 10/27/2008
20244. No Exceptions Made 11/5/2008
20245. Places To Hide Pretensions 10/27/2008
20246. People Sell Their Souls 10/11/2008
20247. This Will Unstabilize The Very Core Of Our Foundations 9/1/2008
20248. Once You Discover That Is True 8/18/2008
20249. Let That Ego Go 8/10/2008
20250. Purpose Meant 7/24/2008
20251. Cleverness You Wish For Me To Taste 7/22/2008
20252. Looking For A Freshness 7/22/2008
20253. Psychotic And Dysfunctional 7/21/2008
20254. When Is It Ever Ready? 7/19/2008
20255. Don'T Be So Quick To Pick Them Up 3/13/2009
20256. Watch This Movie 1/30/2009
20257. Titanic 1/27/2009
20258. Choose To Live Life 2/7/2009
20259. Yes I Love You 12/12/2008
20260. Would You Like To Participate With Us 12/13/2008
20261. Let The Sun In You 1/10/2009
20262. The Original Stays With Me 1/3/2009
20263. Sweet Meat Cleaver 1/13/2009
20264. I Wish My Heart To You Was Known 1/11/2009
20265. Just Do Your Deeds And Be Done With It 1/22/2009
20266. We'Ve All Been Greedy 12/16/2008
20267. Predictably Pretensed 12/18/2008
20268. A Slap On The Face Of Democracy 12/7/2008
20269. Before The Crack Of Dawn 12/1/2008
20270. I Agree. I Am Not An Easy Read! 12/21/2008
20271. When You Finish Your Swim In The Moat 12/24/2008
20272. I Would Hate To Ruin My Reputation 11/1/2008
20273. We Just Ask For Your Support 11/14/2008
20274. Some Would Rather Run And Hide 11/7/2008
20275. Proudness 11/14/2008
20276. First Monday In December 12/1/2008
20277. Some People Just Want The Attention 12/1/2008
20278. Wistful Rendezvous Won'T Do 12/1/2008
20279. Just Old And Tired Methods 11/29/2008
20280. You Can Handle It 12/1/2008

Comments about Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • Elena Toledo Elena Toledo (3/12/2009 5:24:00 PM)

    Great and touching poem. This is very well penned and put together. I love it.

    thanks for sharing

    God bless you

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  • ~ Jon London ~ (6/27/2008 3:58:00 PM)

    Lawrence has the expression-ate magic of a genius, he has an outstanding quality, his ability to create such remarkable imagery in his fine writes, will hold the reader and leave them wanting more....If you like poetry of the highest standard...Lawrence is the man to read......sit back and enjoy the ride...............Lawrence Pertillar can effortlessly create the perfect journey into lushes loveliness for you to sit and enjoy fantastically written expression.

    All the very best

    Jon. London

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  • Chad Halle (1/2/2008 10:16:00 PM)

    Your poems make me move, I enjoy them very much so.

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  • Faith Elizabeth Brigham (4/30/2006 11:00:00 AM)

    Lawrence-You have so much talent and have always been one of favorite poets here. You have a wonderful style and are a true poet!

    All my best-Faith

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  • Prasetya Utama Prasetya Utama (3/17/2006 1:56:00 AM)

    Hello, How do you do? I had been visit and read your poem.
    Fine and exciting poem. Would you like to visit and read my poem.
    Kindly regard,
    Pras.

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Best Poem of Lawrence S. Pertillar

$5 A Barrel Of What?

Oil?
Now sold at what?
Five dollars a barrel?
This is an immediate sign,
That something is not going too well.
Has anyone communicated this,
To those who chose this direction?
And they seem to be okay with this decision?
There just will be more greed.
With those who once had it made in the shade...
To stand with others who demand to feed their needs.
And you all know how improbable that is going to be?
Who is going to touch us anyway?
All Mercedes will be curbed.
And Bentleys will be driven by those deserving.
Well...
Why the gloomy ...

Read the full of $5 A Barrel Of What?

You Know The Ones

Aren't you tired of the folks who pass judgement?
You know the ones...
Quick to tell you how you should live
Always taking handouts from those they take for granted,
Criticizing the people who take their time to give.

Aren't you sick of those who waste your time to gossip?
You know the ones,
Glued to phones like weapons,