poet Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

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Comments about Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • Elena Toledo Elena Toledo (3/12/2009 5:24:00 PM)

    Great and touching poem. This is very well penned and put together. I love it.

    thanks for sharing

    God bless you

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  • ~ Jon London ~ (6/27/2008 3:58:00 PM)

    Lawrence has the expression-ate magic of a genius, he has an outstanding quality, his ability to create such remarkable imagery in his fine writes, will hold the reader and leave them wanting more....If you like poetry of the highest standard...Lawrence is the man to read......sit back and enjoy the ride...............Lawrence Pertillar can effortlessly create the perfect journey into lushes loveliness for you to sit and enjoy fantastically written expression.

    All the very best

    Jon. London

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  • Chad Halle (1/2/2008 10:16:00 PM)

    Your poems make me move, I enjoy them very much so.

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  • Faith Elizabeth Brigham (4/30/2006 11:00:00 AM)

    Lawrence-You have so much talent and have always been one of favorite poets here. You have a wonderful style and are a true poet!

    All my best-Faith

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  • Prasetya Utama Prasetya Utama (3/17/2006 1:56:00 AM)

    Hello, How do you do? I had been visit and read your poem.
    Fine and exciting poem. Would you like to visit and read my poem.
    Kindly regard,
    Pras.

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Best Poem of Lawrence S. Pertillar

You Know The Ones

Aren't you tired of the folks who pass judgement?
You know the ones...
Quick to tell you how you should live
Always taking handouts from those they take for granted,
Criticizing the people who take their time to give.

Aren't you sick of those who waste your time to gossip?
You know the ones,
Glued to phones like weapons,
To add fresh lies to what they've heard!
They are nowhere to be found,
To assist 'you' when you need 'them',
But first to arrive to offer a discouraging word.

Aren't you fed up with their lack of time to listen?
Don't...

Read the full of You Know The Ones

Zapped

When a mind is shut...
Don't try to pry it open.
It is better where it is decaying,
Left alone.
Leave it!
There is hope with others showing
Signs of response.
Those who are replusive...
Are already dead anyway!