Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 109,654 Points (Connecticut)

Lawrence S. Pertillar Poems

2121. Bang It 5/29/2008
2122. So Much Of It That Comes Awarded 5/29/2008
2123. Enriched 5/29/2008
2124. While A Ticking Clock One Watches 5/29/2008
2125. We Are Converging 5/9/2008
2126. Know It, And It Is Done 5/20/2008
2127. Five Minutes Ago 5/30/2008
2128. Greatness 5/30/2008
2129. Not Here To Beat The Beast 5/30/2008
2130. Going, Going...Gone! 5/31/2008
2131. When The Pain Begun Begins To Mend 5/31/2008
2132. Begging To Be Read 5/31/2008
2133. The One That Opened Your Eyes 5/31/2008
2134. Behind Disturbed Hidden Minds 5/31/2008
2135. Perverted Urges 5/31/2008
2136. Out Of Sync 5/31/2008
2137. Treasured 6/1/2008
2138. Very Few That I Have Met 6/1/2008
2139. Change 6/1/2008
2140. Those Who Inflicted 6/1/2008
2141. Cowardly Fool 6/1/2008
2142. Fluke 6/1/2008
2143. Let's Set This Record Straight 6/1/2008
2144. Regardless 6/1/2008
2145. 'Get-That-Thing-On-The-Victim' 6/2/2008
2146. Freelanced Interpretations 6/2/2008
2147. In Known But Unshared Darkness 6/2/2008
2148. Scoop 6/2/2008
2149. Interselves 6/2/2008
2150. God Bestows With Added Obstacles 6/3/2008
2151. In Your Case 6/3/2008
2152. Histrionics 6/3/2008
2153. Keeping It Real 6/3/2008
2154. An End To Divisiveness 6/3/2008
2155. Unpolluted Truth Is 6/4/2008
2156. Even When You Feel You Are At Your Worse 6/4/2008
2157. Ride Them Out 6/4/2008
2158. Fresh Dirt 6/4/2008
2159. One Step Followed By Another 6/4/2008
2160. First Time For Everything 6/5/2008

Comments about Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • Elena Toledo Elena Toledo (3/12/2009 5:24:00 PM)

    Great and touching poem. This is very well penned and put together. I love it.

    thanks for sharing

    God bless you

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  • ~ Jon London ~ (6/27/2008 3:58:00 PM)

    Lawrence has the expression-ate magic of a genius, he has an outstanding quality, his ability to create such remarkable imagery in his fine writes, will hold the reader and leave them wanting more....If you like poetry of the highest standard...Lawrence is the man to read......sit back and enjoy the ride...............Lawrence Pertillar can effortlessly create the perfect journey into lushes loveliness for you to sit and enjoy fantastically written expression.

    All the very best

    Jon. London

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  • Chad Halle (1/2/2008 10:16:00 PM)

    Your poems make me move, I enjoy them very much so.

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  • Faith Elizabeth Brigham (4/30/2006 11:00:00 AM)

    Lawrence-You have so much talent and have always been one of favorite poets here. You have a wonderful style and are a true poet!

    All my best-Faith

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  • Prasetya Utama Prasetya Utama (3/17/2006 1:56:00 AM)

    Hello, How do you do? I had been visit and read your poem.
    Fine and exciting poem. Would you like to visit and read my poem.
    Kindly regard,
    Pras.

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Best Poem of Lawrence S. Pertillar

A Broken Heart Within

A broken heart within me knows,
What loneliness is...
When it is left to linger,
And slowly grows to wither in wishes!

A happiness living outside is dismissed.
For what it is.
Because it isn't felt,
From inside...
With a gladness that appears.

It's much too late to date a memory!
When fading ushers its leaving.
No one else can see it drift.
Yet an emptiness is hinged...
To a pain remaining that is grieving,
Within.

Time gone,
Like the wind blows,
Never returns again!
Not to visit in inquisitive sits...
With the one ...

Read the full of A Broken Heart Within

Zapped

When a mind is shut...
Don't try to pry it open.
It is better where it is decaying,
Left alone.
Leave it!
There is hope with others showing
Signs of response.
Those who are replusive...
Are already dead anyway!