Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 110,088 Points (Connecticut)

Lawrence S. Pertillar Poems

20641. Lady Gaga 10/20/2009
20642. 1647 10/5/2008
20643. We Can 9/2/2008
20644. When I Had A Crush On You 9/12/2008
20645. Nigger, Nigger, Nigger...Nigguhs 12/9/2006
20646. 20% Unemployment Looms 1/26/2009
20647. Adventure 10/1/2006
20648. A Peace They'D Find 9/10/2006
20649. Black History Month 12/17/2006
20650. Thank You Father 12/11/2006
20651. 2010 9/25/2009
20652. ~63~ 11/1/2009
20653. Been There 12/3/2007
20654. 2008 11/17/2007
20655. A Love To Hate 11/20/2006
20656. 2007 12/31/2006
20657. (the) Depthness Of This Kind Of Introspect... 11/23/2008
20658. 2009 9/17/2008
20659. (further Away) From The Year Two Thousand And Eight 12/28/2008
20660. ~60~ 9/21/2006
20661. '...I Feel Like I'Ve Been Robbed! ' 12/16/2008
20662. ~62~ 10/13/2008
20663. ...And 'Now' I Lay Me Down To Sleep 5/21/2009
20664. ' The Freed Of Getting Frisked At Your Risk Foundation ' 5/25/2011
20665. Michael Joseph Jackson 6/25/2009
20666. (the) Fate Of Fatal Lovers 3/14/2009
20667. (the) Benefit Of Needless Conflict 4/12/2009
20668. (the) Budding Grace Of April 4/28/2007
20669. (the) Bigger Lie 5/14/2009
20670. A Broken Heart Within 9/25/2007
20671. (the) Acceptance Of A Nothingness 5/9/2009
20672. $5 A Barrel Of What? 3/6/2008
20673. $10 A Gallon? 3/18/2008

Comments about Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • Elena Toledo Elena Toledo (3/12/2009 5:24:00 PM)

    Great and touching poem. This is very well penned and put together. I love it.

    thanks for sharing

    God bless you

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  • ~ Jon London ~ (6/27/2008 3:58:00 PM)

    Lawrence has the expression-ate magic of a genius, he has an outstanding quality, his ability to create such remarkable imagery in his fine writes, will hold the reader and leave them wanting more....If you like poetry of the highest standard...Lawrence is the man to read......sit back and enjoy the ride...............Lawrence Pertillar can effortlessly create the perfect journey into lushes loveliness for you to sit and enjoy fantastically written expression.

    All the very best

    Jon. London

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  • Chad Halle (1/2/2008 10:16:00 PM)

    Your poems make me move, I enjoy them very much so.

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  • Faith Elizabeth Brigham (4/30/2006 11:00:00 AM)

    Lawrence-You have so much talent and have always been one of favorite poets here. You have a wonderful style and are a true poet!

    All my best-Faith

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  • Prasetya Utama Prasetya Utama (3/17/2006 1:56:00 AM)

    Hello, How do you do? I had been visit and read your poem.
    Fine and exciting poem. Would you like to visit and read my poem.
    Kindly regard,

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Best Poem of Lawrence S. Pertillar

$10 A Gallon?

$10 a gallon?
For what?

'Does that really matter now?
When it approached
One dollar per gallon...
You should have voiced your concern then!
Not when your pockets have gotten thin.
And deepened to hold more lint!
You want to make cents?
Put these sunglasses on.
Grab a twig from a bush...
And get to begging!
You might gain some sympathy,
From someone who recognizes you are in disguise.
And they are in the mood,
To share with you their good attitude.
IF they have some of 'that' left! '

Read the full of $10 A Gallon?

You Are No Longer There!

I no longer hold you like I held you
When I held you...
I no longer want my mind.
I no longer see you like I see you
When I saw you...
I no longer do that, with my time!

Lemonade kisses I licked we onced shared,
I don't even want them anymore...I'm full!