Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 110,181 Points (Connecticut)

Lawrence S. Pertillar Poems

20641. A Mind That Is Alive 4/15/2008
20642. A Kind That Does Not Flaunt 2/23/2008
20643. ¡quiero Que Demasiado Ame! 10/14/2009
20644. ~64~ 9/27/2010
20645. Lady Gaga 10/20/2009
20646. 1647 10/5/2008
20647. We Can 9/2/2008
20648. When I Had A Crush On You 9/12/2008
20649. Nigger, Nigger, Nigger...Nigguhs 12/9/2006
20650. 20% Unemployment Looms 1/26/2009
20651. Adventure 10/1/2006
20652. A Peace They'D Find 9/10/2006
20653. Black History Month 12/17/2006
20654. Thank You Father 12/11/2006
20655. 2010 9/25/2009
20656. ~63~ 11/1/2009
20657. Been There 12/3/2007
20658. 2008 11/17/2007
20659. A Love To Hate 11/20/2006
20660. 2007 12/31/2006
20661. (the) Depthness Of This Kind Of Introspect... 11/23/2008
20662. 2009 9/17/2008
20663. (further Away) From The Year Two Thousand And Eight 12/28/2008
20664. ~60~ 9/21/2006
20665. '...I Feel Like I'Ve Been Robbed! ' 12/16/2008
20666. ~62~ 10/13/2008
20667. ...And 'Now' I Lay Me Down To Sleep 5/21/2009
20668. ' The Freed Of Getting Frisked At Your Risk Foundation ' 5/25/2011
20669. Michael Joseph Jackson 6/25/2009
20670. (the) Fate Of Fatal Lovers 3/14/2009
20671. (the) Benefit Of Needless Conflict 4/12/2009
20672. (the) Budding Grace Of April 4/28/2007
20673. (the) Bigger Lie 5/14/2009
20674. A Broken Heart Within 9/25/2007
20675. (the) Acceptance Of A Nothingness 5/9/2009
20676. $5 A Barrel Of What? 3/6/2008
20677. $10 A Gallon? 3/18/2008

Comments about Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • Elena Toledo Elena Toledo (3/12/2009 5:24:00 PM)

    Great and touching poem. This is very well penned and put together. I love it.

    thanks for sharing

    God bless you

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  • ~ Jon London ~ (6/27/2008 3:58:00 PM)

    Lawrence has the expression-ate magic of a genius, he has an outstanding quality, his ability to create such remarkable imagery in his fine writes, will hold the reader and leave them wanting more....If you like poetry of the highest standard...Lawrence is the man to read......sit back and enjoy the ride...............Lawrence Pertillar can effortlessly create the perfect journey into lushes loveliness for you to sit and enjoy fantastically written expression.

    All the very best

    Jon. London

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  • Chad Halle (1/2/2008 10:16:00 PM)

    Your poems make me move, I enjoy them very much so.

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  • Faith Elizabeth Brigham (4/30/2006 11:00:00 AM)

    Lawrence-You have so much talent and have always been one of favorite poets here. You have a wonderful style and are a true poet!

    All my best-Faith

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  • Prasetya Utama Prasetya Utama (3/17/2006 1:56:00 AM)

    Hello, How do you do? I had been visit and read your poem.
    Fine and exciting poem. Would you like to visit and read my poem.
    Kindly regard,

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Best Poem of Lawrence S. Pertillar

$10 A Gallon?

$10 a gallon?
For what?

'Does that really matter now?
When it approached
One dollar per gallon...
You should have voiced your concern then!
Not when your pockets have gotten thin.
And deepened to hold more lint!
You want to make cents?
Put these sunglasses on.
Grab a twig from a bush...
And get to begging!
You might gain some sympathy,
From someone who recognizes you are in disguise.
And they are in the mood,
To share with you their good attitude.
IF they have some of 'that' left! '

Read the full of $10 A Gallon?

Ghastly Ghoulish Rule

Why be dismayed,
By the eggs these chickens laid?
You were told that the rooster
Was a goosing hooting booster.
From the beginning it was said,
Everything he touched he poisoned dead!
And STILL you let him in your coop?
With all his stink and all his poot!
You should have given him long the boot!