Lawrence S. Pertillar

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Lawrence S. Pertillar Poems

20641. Adventure 10/1/2006
20642. A Peace They'D Find 9/10/2006
20643. Black History Month 12/17/2006
20644. Thank You Father 12/11/2006
20645. 2010 9/25/2009
20646. ~63~ 11/1/2009
20647. Been There 12/3/2007
20648. 2008 11/17/2007
20649. A Love To Hate 11/20/2006
20650. 2007 12/31/2006
20651. (the) Depthness Of This Kind Of Introspect... 11/23/2008
20652. 2009 9/17/2008
20653. (further Away) From The Year Two Thousand And Eight 12/28/2008
20654. ~60~ 9/21/2006
20655. '...I Feel Like I'Ve Been Robbed! ' 12/16/2008
20656. ~62~ 10/13/2008
20657. ...And 'Now' I Lay Me Down To Sleep 5/21/2009
20658. ' The Freed Of Getting Frisked At Your Risk Foundation ' 5/25/2011
20659. Michael Joseph Jackson 6/25/2009
20660. (the) Fate Of Fatal Lovers 3/14/2009
20661. (the) Benefit Of Needless Conflict 4/12/2009
20662. (the) Budding Grace Of April 4/28/2007
20663. (the) Bigger Lie 5/14/2009
20664. A Broken Heart Within 9/25/2007
20665. (the) Acceptance Of A Nothingness 5/9/2009
20666. $5 A Barrel Of What? 3/6/2008
20667. $10 A Gallon? 3/18/2008

Comments about Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • Elena Toledo Elena Toledo (3/12/2009 5:24:00 PM)

    Great and touching poem. This is very well penned and put together. I love it.

    thanks for sharing

    God bless you

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  • ~ Jon London ~ (6/27/2008 3:58:00 PM)

    Lawrence has the expression-ate magic of a genius, he has an outstanding quality, his ability to create such remarkable imagery in his fine writes, will hold the reader and leave them wanting more....If you like poetry of the highest standard...Lawrence is the man to read......sit back and enjoy the ride...............Lawrence Pertillar can effortlessly create the perfect journey into lushes loveliness for you to sit and enjoy fantastically written expression.

    All the very best

    Jon. London

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  • Chad Halle (1/2/2008 10:16:00 PM)

    Your poems make me move, I enjoy them very much so.

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  • Faith Elizabeth Brigham (4/30/2006 11:00:00 AM)

    Lawrence-You have so much talent and have always been one of favorite poets here. You have a wonderful style and are a true poet!

    All my best-Faith

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  • Prasetya Utama Prasetya Utama (3/17/2006 1:56:00 AM)

    Hello, How do you do? I had been visit and read your poem.
    Fine and exciting poem. Would you like to visit and read my poem.
    Kindly regard,
    Pras.

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Best Poem of Lawrence S. Pertillar

$10 A Gallon?

$10 a gallon?
For what?

'Does that really matter now?
When it approached
One dollar per gallon...
You should have voiced your concern then!
Not when your pockets have gotten thin.
And deepened to hold more lint!
You want to make cents?
Put these sunglasses on.
Grab a twig from a bush...
And get to begging!
MAYBE...
You might gain some sympathy,
From someone who recognizes you are in disguise.
And they are in the mood,
To share with you their good attitude.
IF they have some of 'that' left! '

Read the full of $10 A Gallon?

You Are No Longer There!

I no longer hold you like I held you
When I held you...
I no longer want to...in my mind.
I no longer see you like I see you
When I saw you...
I no longer do that, with my time!

Lemonade kisses I licked we onced shared,
I don't even want them anymore...I'm full!