Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 110,038 Points (Connecticut)

Lawrence S. Pertillar Poems

20641. 1647 10/5/2008
20642. We Can 9/2/2008
20643. When I Had A Crush On You 9/12/2008
20644. Nigger, Nigger, Nigger...Nigguhs 12/9/2006
20645. 20% Unemployment Looms 1/26/2009
20646. Adventure 10/1/2006
20647. A Peace They'D Find 9/10/2006
20648. Black History Month 12/17/2006
20649. Thank You Father 12/11/2006
20650. 2010 9/25/2009
20651. ~63~ 11/1/2009
20652. Been There 12/3/2007
20653. 2008 11/17/2007
20654. A Love To Hate 11/20/2006
20655. 2007 12/31/2006
20656. (the) Depthness Of This Kind Of Introspect... 11/23/2008
20657. 2009 9/17/2008
20658. (further Away) From The Year Two Thousand And Eight 12/28/2008
20659. ~60~ 9/21/2006
20660. '...I Feel Like I'Ve Been Robbed! ' 12/16/2008
20661. ~62~ 10/13/2008
20662. ...And 'Now' I Lay Me Down To Sleep 5/21/2009
20663. ' The Freed Of Getting Frisked At Your Risk Foundation ' 5/25/2011
20664. Michael Joseph Jackson 6/25/2009
20665. (the) Fate Of Fatal Lovers 3/14/2009
20666. (the) Benefit Of Needless Conflict 4/12/2009
20667. (the) Budding Grace Of April 4/28/2007
20668. (the) Bigger Lie 5/14/2009
20669. A Broken Heart Within 9/25/2007
20670. (the) Acceptance Of A Nothingness 5/9/2009
20671. $5 A Barrel Of What? 3/6/2008
20672. $10 A Gallon? 3/18/2008

Comments about Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • Elena Toledo Elena Toledo (3/12/2009 5:24:00 PM)

    Great and touching poem. This is very well penned and put together. I love it.

    thanks for sharing

    God bless you

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  • ~ Jon London ~ (6/27/2008 3:58:00 PM)

    Lawrence has the expression-ate magic of a genius, he has an outstanding quality, his ability to create such remarkable imagery in his fine writes, will hold the reader and leave them wanting more....If you like poetry of the highest standard...Lawrence is the man to read......sit back and enjoy the ride...............Lawrence Pertillar can effortlessly create the perfect journey into lushes loveliness for you to sit and enjoy fantastically written expression.

    All the very best

    Jon. London

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  • Chad Halle (1/2/2008 10:16:00 PM)

    Your poems make me move, I enjoy them very much so.

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  • Faith Elizabeth Brigham (4/30/2006 11:00:00 AM)

    Lawrence-You have so much talent and have always been one of favorite poets here. You have a wonderful style and are a true poet!

    All my best-Faith

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  • Prasetya Utama Prasetya Utama (3/17/2006 1:56:00 AM)

    Hello, How do you do? I had been visit and read your poem.
    Fine and exciting poem. Would you like to visit and read my poem.
    Kindly regard,

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Best Poem of Lawrence S. Pertillar

$5 A Barrel Of What?

Now sold at what?
Five dollars a barrel?
This is an immediate sign,
That something is not going too well.
Has anyone communicated this,
To those who chose this direction?
And they seem to be okay with this decision?
There just will be more greed.
With those who once had it made in the shade...
To stand with others who demand to feed their needs.
And you all know how improbable that is going to be?
Who is going to touch us anyway?
All Mercedes will be curbed.
And Bentleys will be driven by those deserving.
Why the gloomy ...

Read the full of $5 A Barrel Of What?

You Know The Ones

Aren't you tired of the folks who pass judgement?
You know the ones...
Quick to tell you how you should live
Always taking handouts from those they take for granted,
Criticizing the people who take their time to give.

Aren't you sick of those who waste your time to gossip?
You know the ones,
Glued to phones like weapons,