Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 110,038 Points (Connecticut)

Lawrence S. Pertillar Poems

20641. When I Had A Crush On You 9/12/2008
20642. Nigger, Nigger, Nigger...Nigguhs 12/9/2006
20643. 20% Unemployment Looms 1/26/2009
20644. Adventure 10/1/2006
20645. A Peace They'D Find 9/10/2006
20646. Black History Month 12/17/2006
20647. Thank You Father 12/11/2006
20648. 2010 9/25/2009
20649. ~63~ 11/1/2009
20650. Been There 12/3/2007
20651. 2008 11/17/2007
20652. A Love To Hate 11/20/2006
20653. 2007 12/31/2006
20654. (the) Depthness Of This Kind Of Introspect... 11/23/2008
20655. 2009 9/17/2008
20656. (further Away) From The Year Two Thousand And Eight 12/28/2008
20657. ~60~ 9/21/2006
20658. '...I Feel Like I'Ve Been Robbed! ' 12/16/2008
20659. ~62~ 10/13/2008
20660. ...And 'Now' I Lay Me Down To Sleep 5/21/2009
20661. ' The Freed Of Getting Frisked At Your Risk Foundation ' 5/25/2011
20662. Michael Joseph Jackson 6/25/2009
20663. (the) Fate Of Fatal Lovers 3/14/2009
20664. (the) Benefit Of Needless Conflict 4/12/2009
20665. (the) Budding Grace Of April 4/28/2007
20666. (the) Bigger Lie 5/14/2009
20667. A Broken Heart Within 9/25/2007
20668. (the) Acceptance Of A Nothingness 5/9/2009
20669. $5 A Barrel Of What? 3/6/2008
20670. $10 A Gallon? 3/18/2008

Comments about Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • Elena Toledo Elena Toledo (3/12/2009 5:24:00 PM)

    Great and touching poem. This is very well penned and put together. I love it.

    thanks for sharing

    God bless you

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  • ~ Jon London ~ (6/27/2008 3:58:00 PM)

    Lawrence has the expression-ate magic of a genius, he has an outstanding quality, his ability to create such remarkable imagery in his fine writes, will hold the reader and leave them wanting more....If you like poetry of the highest standard...Lawrence is the man to read......sit back and enjoy the ride...............Lawrence Pertillar can effortlessly create the perfect journey into lushes loveliness for you to sit and enjoy fantastically written expression.

    All the very best

    Jon. London

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  • Chad Halle (1/2/2008 10:16:00 PM)

    Your poems make me move, I enjoy them very much so.

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  • Faith Elizabeth Brigham (4/30/2006 11:00:00 AM)

    Lawrence-You have so much talent and have always been one of favorite poets here. You have a wonderful style and are a true poet!

    All my best-Faith

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  • Prasetya Utama Prasetya Utama (3/17/2006 1:56:00 AM)

    Hello, How do you do? I had been visit and read your poem.
    Fine and exciting poem. Would you like to visit and read my poem.
    Kindly regard,

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Best Poem of Lawrence S. Pertillar

(the) Bigger Lie

Which liars deny,
They did or did not tell...
The bigger lie.
Or acknowledge any used,
To coverup any known!
Only shows that lies,
Are being told!
And on a daily basis,
They have been sold!

The entire system created,
Has been built on them.
Where has the honesty ever thrived...
When even the churches,
Are dens of sins!

Integrity seems to be known by those ostracized.
Those who speak with a truthfulness,
Who are character assassinated...
And dragged through the mud,

A society that is witnessed falling ...

Read the full of (the) Bigger Lie

Ghastly Ghoulish Rule

Why be dismayed,
By the eggs these chickens laid?
You were told that the rooster
Was a goosing hooting booster.
From the beginning it was said,
Everything he touched he poisoned dead!
And STILL you let him in your coop?
With all his stink and all his poot!
You should have given him long the boot!