Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 109,583 Points (Connecticut)

Lawrence S. Pertillar Poems

2841. Try, Maybe And If 3/16/2016
2842. A Circus Of Tragic Travesties 3/17/2016
2843. Inspired By Someone Else 3/17/2016
2844. Just Because I Can Show I Care 3/17/2016
2845. Great! Some Progress Is Being Made 3/18/2016
2846. Much Too Detailed 3/18/2016
2847. Receipts 3/18/2016
2848. Back To Life 5/10/2016
2849. Orbit 5/12/2016
2850. Left Less Expressive To Suggest 5/12/2016
2851. Carnival Of Surprises 5/12/2016
2852. Poisonous Venom 5/12/2016
2853. Interpretation Of Progress 5/12/2016
2854. Near The Vines 5/13/2016
2855. Pits To Spit 5/13/2016
2856. Can't Stop 5/13/2016
2857. Just Ask The Question 5/14/2016
2858. Branded And Tied Up! 5/14/2016
2859. Headed In The Same Direction 5/15/2016
2860. Another Enemy 5/15/2016
2861. I Owe That To You 5/15/2016
2862. Making Suggestions 5/15/2016
2863. With The Paying Of My Respect 5/16/2016
2864. Dead Minds Confined 5/17/2016
2865. Low, Down And Dirty 5/18/2016
2866. Idle 5/18/2016
2867. Efficiently Sufficient 5/18/2016
2868. Left Out! 5/18/2016
2869. A Bridge Built To Forget 5/19/2016
2870. I've Got It 5/19/2016
2871. Headed Towards The Summer 5/19/2016
2872. A Choice To Choose 5/19/2016
2873. Sob Stories 5/20/2016
2874. That Performance 5/20/2016
2875. The Foul Smell Left To Leave 5/20/2016
2876. Not From Notes To Review 5/21/2016
2877. Chipped China 5/21/2016
2878. Download To Let Go 5/21/2016
2879. Wishes To Be Liked 5/21/2016
2880. Efforts To Unite 5/22/2016

Comments about Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • Elena Toledo Elena Toledo (3/12/2009 5:24:00 PM)

    Great and touching poem. This is very well penned and put together. I love it.

    thanks for sharing

    God bless you

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  • ~ Jon London ~ (6/27/2008 3:58:00 PM)

    Lawrence has the expression-ate magic of a genius, he has an outstanding quality, his ability to create such remarkable imagery in his fine writes, will hold the reader and leave them wanting more....If you like poetry of the highest standard...Lawrence is the man to read......sit back and enjoy the ride...............Lawrence Pertillar can effortlessly create the perfect journey into lushes loveliness for you to sit and enjoy fantastically written expression.

    All the very best

    Jon. London

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  • Chad Halle (1/2/2008 10:16:00 PM)

    Your poems make me move, I enjoy them very much so.

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  • Faith Elizabeth Brigham (4/30/2006 11:00:00 AM)

    Lawrence-You have so much talent and have always been one of favorite poets here. You have a wonderful style and are a true poet!

    All my best-Faith

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  • Prasetya Utama Prasetya Utama (3/17/2006 1:56:00 AM)

    Hello, How do you do? I had been visit and read your poem.
    Fine and exciting poem. Would you like to visit and read my poem.
    Kindly regard,

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Best Poem of Lawrence S. Pertillar

(the) Acceptance Of A Nothingness

Somehow the meaninglessness...
Many describe as senseless,
Has a meaningfulness...
In a useful kind of way.

The acceptance of a nothingness...
As it is applied,
Has a purpose that drives curiosities...
To perceive a conception connected,
With a totalness lived.
Yet arguably not perfected.

And rejecting this completion given,
As 'part of' a mural of existence...
Does not validate,
A separateness.
Like a timeless void without exits.
And since there aren't any witnessed...
It sits.

Since there is an attention given it.
Even ...

Read the full of (the) Acceptance Of A Nothingness

You Are No Longer There!

I no longer hold you like I held you
When I held you...
I no longer want my mind.
I no longer see you like I see you
When I saw you...
I no longer do that, with my time!

Lemonade kisses I licked we onced shared,
I don't even want them anymore...I'm full!