Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 110,252 Points (Connecticut)

Lawrence S. Pertillar Poems

20641. You Have Raised These Weeds 10/7/2006
20642. You Upset With Me, Father? 9/9/2006
20643. A Mind That Is Alive 4/15/2008
20644. A Kind That Does Not Flaunt 2/23/2008
20645. ¡quiero Que Demasiado Ame! 10/14/2009
20646. ~64~ 9/27/2010
20647. Lady Gaga 10/20/2009
20648. 1647 10/5/2008
20649. We Can 9/2/2008
20650. When I Had A Crush On You 9/12/2008
20651. Nigger, Nigger, Nigger...Nigguhs 12/9/2006
20652. 20% Unemployment Looms 1/26/2009
20653. Adventure 10/1/2006
20654. A Peace They'D Find 9/10/2006
20655. Black History Month 12/17/2006
20656. Thank You Father 12/11/2006
20657. 2010 9/25/2009
20658. ~63~ 11/1/2009
20659. Been There 12/3/2007
20660. 2008 11/17/2007
20661. A Love To Hate 11/20/2006
20662. 2007 12/31/2006
20663. (the) Depthness Of This Kind Of Introspect... 11/23/2008
20664. 2009 9/17/2008
20665. (further Away) From The Year Two Thousand And Eight 12/28/2008
20666. ~60~ 9/21/2006
20667. '...I Feel Like I'Ve Been Robbed! ' 12/16/2008
20668. ~62~ 10/13/2008
20669. ...And 'Now' I Lay Me Down To Sleep 5/21/2009
20670. ' The Freed Of Getting Frisked At Your Risk Foundation ' 5/25/2011
20671. Michael Joseph Jackson 6/25/2009
20672. (the) Fate Of Fatal Lovers 3/14/2009
20673. (the) Benefit Of Needless Conflict 4/12/2009
20674. (the) Budding Grace Of April 4/28/2007
20675. (the) Bigger Lie 5/14/2009
20676. A Broken Heart Within 9/25/2007
20677. (the) Acceptance Of A Nothingness 5/9/2009
20678. $5 A Barrel Of What? 3/6/2008
20679. $10 A Gallon? 3/18/2008

Comments about Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • Elena Toledo Elena Toledo (3/12/2009 5:24:00 PM)

    Great and touching poem. This is very well penned and put together. I love it.

    thanks for sharing

    God bless you

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  • ~ Jon London ~ (6/27/2008 3:58:00 PM)

    Lawrence has the expression-ate magic of a genius, he has an outstanding quality, his ability to create such remarkable imagery in his fine writes, will hold the reader and leave them wanting more....If you like poetry of the highest standard...Lawrence is the man to read......sit back and enjoy the ride...............Lawrence Pertillar can effortlessly create the perfect journey into lushes loveliness for you to sit and enjoy fantastically written expression.

    All the very best

    Jon. London

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  • Chad Halle (1/2/2008 10:16:00 PM)

    Your poems make me move, I enjoy them very much so.

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  • Faith Elizabeth Brigham (4/30/2006 11:00:00 AM)

    Lawrence-You have so much talent and have always been one of favorite poets here. You have a wonderful style and are a true poet!

    All my best-Faith

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  • Prasetya Utama Prasetya Utama (3/17/2006 1:56:00 AM)

    Hello, How do you do? I had been visit and read your poem.
    Fine and exciting poem. Would you like to visit and read my poem.
    Kindly regard,

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Best Poem of Lawrence S. Pertillar

(the) Acceptance Of A Nothingness

Somehow the meaninglessness...
Many describe as senseless,
Has a meaningfulness...
In a useful kind of way.

The acceptance of a nothingness...
As it is applied,
Has a purpose that drives curiosities...
To perceive a conception connected,
With a totalness lived.
Yet arguably not perfected.

And rejecting this completion given,
As 'part of' a mural of existence...
Does not validate,
A separateness.
Like a timeless void without exits.
And since there aren't any witnessed...
It sits.

Since there is an attention given it.
Even ...

Read the full of (the) Acceptance Of A Nothingness

Ghastly Ghoulish Rule

Why be dismayed,
By the eggs these chickens laid?
You were told that the rooster
Was a goosing hooting booster.
From the beginning it was said,
Everything he touched he poisoned dead!
And STILL you let him in your coop?
With all his stink and all his poot!
You should have given him long the boot!