Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 110,252 Points (Connecticut)

Lawrence S. Pertillar Poems

3521. Baracked With Obamalitis 2/25/2009
3522. Isolated 2/25/2009
3523. With Nothing From Their Greed To Learn 2/26/2009
3524. This Introduction Of Truth 2/26/2009
3525. Where Is The Satisfaction One Gets 2/26/2009
3526. Because Of You 2/26/2009
3527. Feeling 'Whole' I Do! 2/26/2009
3528. Dab Nab It 2/26/2009
3529. Indulged By Extravagance 2/26/2009
3530. Gay 2/26/2009
3531. You Set My Desires On Fire 2/26/2009
3532. I Can Love 2/26/2009
3533. Disregarding One's Gift Of Life 2/20/2009
3534. On Foreign Shores 2/20/2009
3535. You'Re Just Jealous 2/20/2009
3536. Here Just To Drop Off The Evidence 2/21/2009
3537. The Proof Of It 2/23/2009
3538. In A Boast Stayed Boosted 2/23/2009
3539. Freedom Of Speech 2/23/2009
3540. I'D Like My Pockets To Be As Full 2/27/2009
3541. I See You In The Spring 2/27/2009
3542. You See Life With A Wish To Leech 2/27/2009
3543. I Am The Best At This 2/27/2009
3544. Fearmongers 2/27/2009
3545. Prodded Into Discussion 2/28/2009
3546. Barely Noticed 2/28/2009
3547. Only Then 2/28/2009
3548. Poses Taken To Take Them No Where 3/1/2009
3549. This Time It Is Their Turn To Show Concern 3/1/2009
3550. To Keep Your Life Sweetened 3/1/2009
3551. Their Own Way Of Life 3/2/2009
3552. Still No Insight Comes 3/2/2009
3553. False Pride 3/5/2009
3554. No Longer A Consideration 3/8/2009
3555. Basking In The Glow 3/8/2009
3556. I'M New At This 3/8/2009
3557. Just Not Equipped 3/8/2009
3558. For Those Who Cling Onto Their Fantasized Insights 3/9/2009
3559. Something Inside Of Me 3/9/2009
3560. Which One Would Have A Better Chance 3/9/2009

Comments about Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • Elena Toledo Elena Toledo (3/12/2009 5:24:00 PM)

    Great and touching poem. This is very well penned and put together. I love it.

    thanks for sharing

    God bless you

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  • ~ Jon London ~ (6/27/2008 3:58:00 PM)

    Lawrence has the expression-ate magic of a genius, he has an outstanding quality, his ability to create such remarkable imagery in his fine writes, will hold the reader and leave them wanting more....If you like poetry of the highest standard...Lawrence is the man to read......sit back and enjoy the ride...............Lawrence Pertillar can effortlessly create the perfect journey into lushes loveliness for you to sit and enjoy fantastically written expression.

    All the very best

    Jon. London

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  • Chad Halle (1/2/2008 10:16:00 PM)

    Your poems make me move, I enjoy them very much so.

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  • Faith Elizabeth Brigham (4/30/2006 11:00:00 AM)

    Lawrence-You have so much talent and have always been one of favorite poets here. You have a wonderful style and are a true poet!

    All my best-Faith

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  • Prasetya Utama Prasetya Utama (3/17/2006 1:56:00 AM)

    Hello, How do you do? I had been visit and read your poem.
    Fine and exciting poem. Would you like to visit and read my poem.
    Kindly regard,

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Best Poem of Lawrence S. Pertillar

A Broken Heart Within

A broken heart within me knows,
What loneliness is...
When it is left to linger,
And slowly grows to wither in wishes!

A happiness living outside is dismissed.
For what it is.
Because it isn't felt,
From inside...
With a gladness that appears.

It's much too late to date a memory!
When fading ushers its leaving.
No one else can see it drift.
Yet an emptiness is hinged...
To a pain remaining that is grieving,

Time gone,
Like the wind blows,
Never returns again!
Not to visit in inquisitive sits...
With the one ...

Read the full of A Broken Heart Within

Slaves To Debts

No freedom to live it,
Is without expense.
And becoming a slave to money,
Affording a welcoming of decadence...
Few can ignore,
'The gotta have it and now' seduction.

That kind of ongoing production produces,
Teasing temptations.