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You have an interesting style, post modernist or something. But I still think your poems look more like dialogs. I'm not saying you should use sixth grade rhyming, ok? ;) Just some shaping would do them good, I think. Anyway, that's only my opinion.
Sel'e kaak - different Bak! Dis hoe ek nou voel.It's so obviousAs clear as freaking DAYbut still she staysCupids chokehold's too tightLight headed