Lieketseng Ntsala

Rookie (23 March 1985 / Johannesburg, South Africa)

Comments about Lieketseng Ntsala

  • Lucianne Fasolo (1/25/2007 12:14:00 PM)

    You have an interesting style, post modernist or something. But I still think your poems look more like dialogs. I'm not saying you should use sixth grade rhyming, ok? ;) Just some shaping would do them good, I think. Anyway, that's only my opinion.

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Rhythem For Blue

I never doubted the fact that one day true love could be
Always knew that some day he would manifest himself to me
Now everytime I breath
My hearst sings a new song
It don't have any words as yet
But the Rythem is quiet clear

You Make my soul sing....

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