Lieketseng Ntsala

Rookie (23 March 1985 / Johannesburg, South Africa)

Comments about Lieketseng Ntsala

  • Lucianne Fasolo (1/25/2007 12:14:00 PM)

    You have an interesting style, post modernist or something. But I still think your poems look more like dialogs. I'm not saying you should use sixth grade rhyming, ok? ;) Just some shaping would do them good, I think. Anyway, that's only my opinion.

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Sel'E Kaak Ander Bak

Sel'e kaak - different Bak!

Dis hoe ek nou voel.
It's so obvious
As clear as freaking DAY
but still she stays

Cupids chokehold's too tight
Light headed

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