Loke Kok yee
To Valsa George And Akhtar Jawad
There is great truth in the saying that great minds think alike.
And it's seen in your lovely poems which is much to my delight.
Your eyes can clearly perceive what others find hard to see,
Simple lines from creative minds, I think that must be the key.
Your poetry is an inspiration to the rest who are less blessed,
Providing them the guidance for flaws that need to be addressed.
When I'm covered with goose pimples or a tear falls from my eye,
It came from reading your poetry a fact which I cannot deny.
There must be many writer who are just as ...
Rhythm And Rhyme
Do not ask the whys and wherefores of rhythm and rhyme
But only the how and when from those more poem incline.
My secret in the writing is, do it late on a murky night
The Missus then be snoring, you can do whatever you like.
For inspiration and good measure, watch lots of racy porn
However nothing will be moving if you watch till early morn.