Louise Bizzari

Comments about Louise Bizzari

  • long gone (4/9/2005 5:42:00 PM)

    Having read through your work tonight, there is a lot of talent on display. Ignore the Herbert's of this world, they never got anywhere and they don't want you to. God bless, and keep up the good work.

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  • Mary Nagy (3/28/2005 2:05:00 PM)

    I think it's obvious by some of your 'attention' you've received you are an enormous talent here. Some may not like the competition.....I hope you stay here at P/H and share more of your wonderful poetry. Not all people here are angry and mean. Sincerely, Mary

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  • Velmar Pewee Hale Johnson (3/21/2005 1:37:00 AM)

    Louise Bizzari, wondering when you'll be posting some more of your poems?

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  • Velmar Pewee Hale Johnson (3/7/2005 10:00:00 PM)

    . Louise, I like your poetry, and find it refreshing. I like a person to speak their mind as you do. Anyone can cater to a person's ego, but you tell it like it is. Never be afraid to speak your mind, no mater what others might say, and remember it isn't always the quantity of poetry one writes, but the quality of each poem that really matters. Your 13 poems are great, and even better than my 85 poems.

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  • Herbert Nehrlich1 (3/4/2005 7:06:00 AM)

    Forgot to ask: Is the reason that you do not list your biography that you do not have one worth mentioning?

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  • Herbert Nehrlich1 (3/4/2005 7:04:00 AM)

    I find your poetry suboptimal, your mental state questionable and your general demeanour on P/H of such pathetic juvenile anger that I am hereby inviting you to try your luck elsewhere.
    If you think that your 'poetry' will keep you here, I know you are mistaken.
    To me, you sound like a disgruntled Jew (no racial slur intended) who has not a chip on her shoulder but a load of manure of questionable origin.
    Perhaps professional help would be the thing.

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Best Poem of Louise Bizzari

Anguis In Herba Herbert

There was a Nazi Sauer-Kraut
Who darted venon all about
A slimy reptile....alittle man
He slithered slovenly
And then he ran

His lifeless little puny Dink
Is all that Herbie had to Wink
His hate-filled mind in deep despair
Will slobber and slaver everywhere

His senseless verse
That didn't rymthm
Was worth not
One old rusty dime

So fate hath called
And then stepped in
To purge his soul
Of scum within

A language crude
Where he doth dwell
In flames of Scorching Searing Hell
The words he penned in Dung filled ink
Gave ...

Read the full of Anguis In Herba Herbert

A Cat

There was A Cat left in a house
Whose occupants long gone
He comes and goes
With spotted nose
To wander there alone
Through vacant rooms
He hops and zooms
No ball of thread has he
Past moldy walls