Luce Darwin

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  • Sue Ann Simar (7/5/2013 8:01:00 PM)

    I see a talent here, although I didn't read one poem that I felt was really finished. I hope you are reading poetry- maybe some publications like American Poetry Review and Poetry. Keep writing...I'm sincere about believing in your talent.

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Falling Idealism

As the after glow fades
by a miracle my vision is regained;
My ideals collapse
Then are loosely put back together again
By the moon's gravitational pull
His titanium figure melts
In the fires that were created
Under the immense heat of my rage;
Once some unbreakable ideal

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