Luis Gil de la Puente

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  • Phumudzo Mapila (9/12/2006 8:09:00 AM)

    Luis i believe your a wondreful poet i have read most of your poems and i think you are amazing you've got massive talent so keep writting.cheers.I'll keep reading your poems

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Best Poem of Luis Gil de la Puente

((12) Breakfast With Diamonds

A cold shower
Is a good way
To open my eyes.

I wake up with the stare
of those clean weightless
compasionate eyes,
filling me with motionless
sweet energy.

Peace, wide forehead,
translucient skin
of your huge eyed look,
Amelia.

I wish you could feel the diamonds.

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(3) Human Alchemy

They say gold is hidden in lead,
there are those who believe so.

They get blind in the shine,
siren songs, vain flash,
traps in mortal mud.
They are impatient alchemists
who find shortcuts to nowhere.