Luis Gil de la Puente

Rookie - 292 Points (Palencia-Spain)

Luis Gil de la Puente Poems

81. ((6) The Elite Of The Pure 7/21/2006
82. ((7) Burning, Burning, Burnt 1/27/2007
83. ((12) Breakfast With Diamonds 8/18/2006
84. ((11) Friends 8/2/2006

Comments about Luis Gil de la Puente

  • Phumudzo Mapila (9/12/2006 8:09:00 AM)

    Luis i believe your a wondreful poet i have read most of your poems and i think you are amazing you've got massive talent so keep writting.cheers.I'll keep reading your poems

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Best Poem of Luis Gil de la Puente

((11) Friends

Wholesome hearts,
well deserved friendship,
good chunks of truth
wrapped in cigarette smoke.

Singing together, playing our tune.
High school, low voices,
Coughing.... Silence, please!
A true lady is listening.

Winning together,
playing the same game,
to simply convince each other
we may be wrong.

Drinking from the same chalice,
We taste the same curse:
You bring us Truth'.

Little as we are,
we look through the same keyhole
to sometimes have
a good finishing touch.

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(2) Getting Fixed

I don´t know why I am not able to look at him
What if I could do without this seriousness?
And see him face to face.

At dinner I can feel him
Sitting behind
And then, suddendly, his laughter,
That way to use the spoon.

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