Magic What'sHerName

Rookie (July 10,1993 / NoStalkersPlease)

Comments about Magic What'sHerName

  • Deborah Cromer Deborah Cromer (6/25/2009 10:11:00 AM)

    This poem reminds me of my poem 'Going'. I read the comment for you left by Alex Lewis and it's a good one. You can have hope and put that into your poems. Maybe years from now, someone will be reading your poetry and you might help them through a bad time. Share your strength and write about what gets you through. If you can help just one person, that makes a difference. Poetry is just more than words on paper, it changes people's lives. :) Deborah Cromer

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  • Alex Lewis (6/24/2009 3:01:00 PM)

    Hey Magic,

    After reading your poetry, I believe that you are a great modern-day poet (much like myself) . I see a writer's life for you! Also, do not be depressed. Without the family that you depresses you, you would have no inspiration for your poetry. I look forward to reading more of your poems.

Accept Me As I Am

No one hears my screams
Because I'm falling apart at the seams
But no one is on my team
And I silently cry
Wishing I would just die
Because I don't get treated right
People judge me because I stay away from the light!
They don't think I'm good enough
So I try to act tough

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