Magic What'sHerName

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  • Deborah Cromer Deborah Cromer (6/25/2009 10:11:00 AM)

    This poem reminds me of my poem 'Going'. I read the comment for you left by Alex Lewis and it's a good one. You can have hope and put that into your poems. Maybe years from now, someone will be reading your poetry and you might help them through a bad time. Share your strength and write about what gets you through. If you can help just one person, that makes a difference. Poetry is just more than words on paper, it changes people's lives. :) Deborah Cromer

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  • Alex Lewis (6/24/2009 3:01:00 PM)

    Hey Magic,

    After reading your poetry, I believe that you are a great modern-day poet (much like myself) . I see a writer's life for you! Also, do not be depressed. Without the family that you depresses you, you would have no inspiration for your poetry. I look forward to reading more of your poems.

Best Poem of Magic What'sHerName

**low Self Esteem*

You say I'm not good with words
And that I don't need herds
Of people around me to make me feel
Any better about myself and it's a done deal
That I'll heal
I'm not the person you want me to be
Or that you wish I'd be
All I am is me.

I have low self esteem
I'm falling apart at the seams
And I just want to scream
Praying you're on my team
But your not
I don't feel hot
Or pretty
But I feel kicked
And I was always last picked.

I know I'm not ur favorite anymore
I'm just a big bore
And someone to be ashamed of
I wish I was a ...

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He Loved Her

He fell in love,
She lived above.
He loved her,
She had better.
He said forever,
She said never.
He said I love you,
She said I know it's not true.
He loved her.

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