Magic What'sHerName

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Magic What'sHerName Poems

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  • Deborah Cromer Deborah Cromer (6/25/2009 10:11:00 AM)

    This poem reminds me of my poem 'Going'. I read the comment for you left by Alex Lewis and it's a good one. You can have hope and put that into your poems. Maybe years from now, someone will be reading your poetry and you might help them through a bad time. Share your strength and write about what gets you through. If you can help just one person, that makes a difference. Poetry is just more than words on paper, it changes people's lives. :) Deborah Cromer

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  • Alex Lewis (6/24/2009 3:01:00 PM)

    Hey Magic,

    After reading your poetry, I believe that you are a great modern-day poet (much like myself) . I see a writer's life for you! Also, do not be depressed. Without the family that you depresses you, you would have no inspiration for your poetry. I look forward to reading more of your poems.

Best Poem of Magic What'sHerName

*abuse Me*

I sit on the ground
I'm trying not to make a sound
I stare at my feet
Hoping he can't find me and beat
Me until I'm all bloody and worn
Believe me I could have sworn
He looked like a good guy
But hey people aren't perfect and they like to lie.

While I'm throwing rocks at a tree
I feel like I'm going to pay a fee
Soon he will find me
I'm too tired to run anymore!
He was such a poor
Man and I thought he needed me
But he used and abused me!
And now he's after me
He wants what he can't have
I cried and all he did was laugh
How could he be...

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Hurting Me

This is not what I wanted
I'm not ready to die for you
I hope you realized that I love you
But this is more than I need
I'm not going to take the lead

I'm not going to bleed
For someone who can't find the need
For an I love you

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