Mahfooz Ali

Rookie - 79 Points (28 October / Lucknow (U.P.) India)

Comments about Mahfooz Ali

  • The Poet Poet The Poet Poet (1/19/2016 9:46:00 PM)

    sometimes when we are very young we get so very scared will she love me will she report me what will she do no one ever knew it's all in a woman's mind to love or to be kind but in memories we alone have she has made us lose our mind and an opportunity we all leave far behind in the annals of time call it infatuation if you may

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  • Soul Watcher Soul Watcher (1/19/2016 7:03:00 AM)

    Hey, I liked your poems and the way you write your poems.
    Please keep us, waiting for more by you.

  • Seham M (7/12/2010 12:23:00 AM)

    I just found this site, and have to say that after reading a bunch of poems from others and yourself, you have a real interesting state of mind. Your thoughts are unique and the way you describe and portray your thoughts is very thoughtful and well put. I also write poems and short stories. They usually come from feelings that are sometimes hard to depict to others in word of speech. But when I write them down it makes me understand my feelings and frame of mind better. I read the peom about your mother, I thought it was lovely. And Inshallah She knew and continues to know how much you love her. Keep up your good work, so we can continue enjoying your beautiful works of literature. Take care, Ma'salama

  • acharya gopinath (3/11/2009 10:47:00 AM)

    You are writing immensely and have deep rooted affections. Let a Xanthic Flower give fragrance in your life. I am proud of reading your poems but it is too late. Allah never let down any one nor put you to suffer. Always hopes bring light.

  • Maryam Khan (1/7/2009 3:45:00 AM)

    an amazing poet with deep thoughts.
    i like his creativity n almost all of his poems are reaalt cute n interesting.
    Keep up your good work!
    Maryam

  • Amani B (4/5/2008 7:40:00 AM)

    a brilliant poet with lovely ideas
    very impressive

  • Mikoto (6/13/2006 4:36:00 AM)

    Thank you for comment.
    I like your poems.
    Keep it up.
    Thank you.

    Mikoto

Best Poem of Mahfooz Ali

Thank You, Father

Fathers hold you when you have bad dreams
And they comfort you when all is lost it seems.
Fathers teach you to dribble a basketball and shoot a free throw
And they lead you as you grow.
Fathers teach you how to drive a car
And they try to teach you how to putt for par.
Fathers wipe the tears of your broken heart
And they hold your hand when you don't know how to start.
Fathers quiz the boys who take you on a date
And they scold those boys who bring you home late.
Fathers carry you on their shoulders when you're too small to see
And they watch as you giggle when...

Read the full of Thank You, Father

Retirement

Retirement's a time we all hope to find,
With no clock to watch except in our mind.
The daily demands of the job that you choose,
Take its toll, and you worry, afraid you will lose
The thing you worked for all of the years
To leave only heartaches misery and tears

You are most fortunate to achieve your goal
And retire with health and family still whole.

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