Mallika Achuthan Menon

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  • Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi (5/28/2014 1:27:00 PM)

    I love the softness of emotions in your poem Dusk. You are so good with feelings and words.

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  • Paul Sebastian Paul Sebastian (3/24/2014 12:05:00 AM)

    Your poem is poignant...asking the 'why' of life. You have captured the imagination very well. It captured me!
    You may want to edit two words: sincereness to sincerity and 'feminineness' to...At times this endowed blessing... Keep writing!

  • Aaraadhakan Fan (11/20/2013 4:54:00 AM)

    Well expressed the facts of life thru' simple yet powerful words! .. keep penning..

Can I.....

Amidst the hustle and bustle of day
Can I be in your thoughts, my dear?
Why did my mind who is acting childlike,
Taxing me by asking this
From dawn to dusk and vice versa?
The entire linear thoughts of mine
Amalgamated in you only.
You are so kind please do a favour
Just keep aside a little space

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