Well Done Mandira,
Feel the Sensation of movement in meaning.Is the strain with your pen or thoughts.while reading the poemThe word of Sun crosses the plane of the(earth's) readers equator.Is your reality day and shadow night are of equal length while you write this one.
Syed Ali Sagar
Well done MANDIRA,
The sensation of movement in meaning.Natural strain is with your pen or Thought? . Word of Sun crosses the readers equator.
Is your reality of day and shadow of night are of equal length.....M.Mitra.
-Syed Ali Sagar