Manonton Dalan

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  • Ena N. Mori (2/27/2016 5:02:00 PM)

    What I read is a journal of a simple man who draws on the rhythms of daily living. Your written communication is naturally honest and poetic. It gives us a glimpse of the event and the emotion is re-created. Keep at it, G.

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I Feel It

gentle moving cumulus
painted bundled roses
white tint of smokes
cloudy; mud in brooks

hugging mountaintops
bare-naked shiny rocks
moist dripping down cliff
to ferns; grandpas on earth

water flows down river
shallow yet it sparkles
like your smile in morning mist
i could feel it, i could even taste

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